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very beatuiful and greatly written kida puts a twist in the way u look at the chars in the show now i always thought it would be sasuke who slit his wrist and left this life for the next please write more please

I disagree. I really liked this piece. It was poetic in a fluffy/angsty way. I loved the begining especially. Sasuke's "infatuation." Ya know, there's something nagging at my head. Normally, when people plan to commit suicide that is, do they really attack their wrists first? It's quite often that I read it in fanfics. But....well actually, nvm. The part that always affects me worse in the story is where Sakura had avoided Naruto. Even though that part was short, it's one of those things that make me feel even more sorry for my poor lil blonde.


Ria

LOVED IT!!!!!!!

Honestly, it was very well written and easily believable. Especially with the way that Naruto has always been treated. Normally i really don't care much for the suicidal stories, though i do like the more neglect/abusisve (really dislike major abuse, rarely like the ones with rape unless it has a good plot and ending).

even with the suicidal undertone, it has just the right amount of - history? - to back it up. and the fact that you brought in sasuke makes it even better to me. (loyal sasu/naru fan) plus i don't care what most people will say - there is too much between those to two for them not to have something - they understand each other too much.

the only thing i saw wrong (at first) was the kunai and dagger - as far as i know a kunai is pretty much the same as a dagger - but i take it that what was really meant was a kunai and an - eastern style dagger? - which was pretty clear in the next paragragh

also - i loved how you used kyubbi - having it to cause naruto to relive the pain by reopening all the wounds? - now that was interesting.

Whatever your smokin', I want some.... your...um... story was....uh... good?


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