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for Revelations Of The Mind

by Gavin

schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that has to be one of the best storys i have red and would like to see if contiued
person Tleilaxu
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! I am a big Kyuubi fan. Major points for you. your story was well written and the plot was excellent. I loved it all! Though now you need to add a steam sex scene to top it off LOL. Really good job! I am greatly impressed.
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! *pauses for dramatic effect* That was freakin' AWESOME! Sugoi! Yay! I'm impressed! I love this fic, don't ever stop writing it until it's through! Five stars! Excellent! I'm ranting! I'll shut up in just a sec. I'd be honored if you read my fic and told me what you honestly think of it...any improvements, or anything! I plan on writing NaruSaku in the future, but I'm not sure if I can top this! Moo Ichido, Sugoi! (Once again, GREAT!!)

*~*Kiyasume*~*
person RadgarEleding
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic. I can't wait to see more.
Update soon please.
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It seems I say this to a lot of the authors I read frequently. Watch your typos please.
person spiritwolf30
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was really really good the truth i`m not much into reading a Narto and Sakura fics but after reading this story I might start reading more of them please I hope that you update soon because I cann`t wait to read more of this story so please update soon
person logophobia
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story so much, though i don't think that pink is really naruto's color. still this is the best chapter so far, keep it up!!!!!
person Josh
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey great update keep it up and it isgetting better... Why did Sakura hit Naruto for and I guess if she is over Stressed from beingin there land being announced as a princess I guess that would do it... Now for the next chapter I know its going to be good so hope to hear from you soon...JTB8834@aol.com
person joy2
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it started out good but i lost interest in the fight scene in the 4th chapter. they could easily evade that attack if they where ( naruto and sakura ) that good according to your description in the story. :D

but nice story none the less.

person Jin
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A beautifully written chapter. The descriptions of the ceremony were by far my favorite part. Naruto and Sakura seem to be getting closer every instant, and I look forward to seeing more. Update soon!

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