schedule
June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH hurry up and do more!
there were a few typos here and there i think mostly due to your word processor
you might consider getting a beta reader
anyways
happy writing
kri-chan
there were a few typos here and there i think mostly due to your word processor
you might consider getting a beta reader
anyways
happy writing
kri-chan
schedule
June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looks really interesting, can't wait to read more. Really good smut too.
schedule
June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good start i think. looking forward to the next chapter, just how are they going to get sakura to go along with their little idea?