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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was cute, nice job. And very few errors, just keep up proof reading and soon your writing will get better. Good job.
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW.... THIS IS AN AWSEOM FIC!!!! YOU SHOULD WRITE A SEQUL OR POST MORE CHAPTERS !!!!! THIS FIC ROCLS!!!!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! The end was so funny! I loved it when Sasuke made Sakura and Ino leave. I also loved how he was stalking Naruto! But the lemon was so HOT! I love your fics!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is awesome and well written! very nicely done ^_^
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love sex...thank u sooooo much.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snort of laughter*
"Could it be icing?!!"
that was great. i liked the whole story, and the lemon was pretty good, though half of it was in sasuke's mind, wandering. but the important parts were shown, so it's okay! i liked the whole idea of the story. you've really got some talent for writting!!^^~
"Could it be icing?!!"
that was great. i liked the whole story, and the lemon was pretty good, though half of it was in sasuke's mind, wandering. but the important parts were shown, so it's okay! i liked the whole idea of the story. you've really got some talent for writting!!^^~
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LAWL! That was great. It was REALLY hard not to fidget while reading, since my little sister was watching tv like five feet away from me. She caught me drooling but just thought I was being stupid XP Innocents. You gotta love it <3
Well, nice job. I really enjoyed. Cheers to a good fic!
Well, nice job. I really enjoyed. Cheers to a good fic!
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha...some sort of icing. ^^
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June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i want me some of that icing. >:)
great job! i really like the concept, but yes, sex on the counter where anyone could see.. that would be one candy shop i'd frequent. great job!
great job! i really like the concept, but yes, sex on the counter where anyone could see.. that would be one candy shop i'd frequent. great job!
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June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah, i'm gonna say it again. you know, sudden urge. great job!
now i'm going to read the wild child. ;)
now i'm going to read the wild child. ;)