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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD that was awesome!
YAY
haha scarecrow and dolphin good couple 2 ^^
but NaruSasu is my fav
good job
YAY
haha scarecrow and dolphin good couple 2 ^^
but NaruSasu is my fav
good job
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD that was awesome!
YAY
haha scarecrow and dolphin good couple 2 ^^
but NaruSasu is my fav
good job
YAY
haha scarecrow and dolphin good couple 2 ^^
but NaruSasu is my fav
good job
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was well done I really enjoyed it. It'd be interesting to see how the dolphin and scarecrow got together ;P Thank you for a good read ^_^
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May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
Your story was cool! If you have the time could you write a kak/iru story pleeeeeeeeease!
Your fan,
Stacy
Your story was cool! If you have the time could you write a kak/iru story pleeeeeeeeease!
Your fan,
Stacy
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May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You really need to take a good look at your fic and realize all the problems with it. Your grasp of basic grammar, comma usage and sentence structure leave much to be desired. I read a few pages before these errors totally put me off from reading the rest of the story. I can overlook some grammar and comma mistakes, but you had really obvious run on sentences. You could benefit from re-reading your own work and getting a beta reader. Good luck with your future writing.