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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Weeeeeeeeeeeee please update soon!! ic ant wait to read what sasuke really has planned for naruto!!! also the plot is very good, and i like the fact that you give descriptions and is fairly detailed about it, well detailed enough for me, but i wanna see sasuke's and naruto's reaction more. But keep up the good work!!!!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like your story.it's interesting .on with the next chapter :)
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Has some promise, but you need to fix the grammer or have someonehelp you.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is very cruel to end the chapter like that... I LIKED IT :)
Write more?
Thank you.
Write more?
Thank you.