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by Luciano

person Lease
schedule April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, hell yeah!!!!!
person Reemu-Chan (not signed in)
schedule April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are so welcome ^^
omg, just finished reading the fifth chapter. So cuuute =^-^= I can't wait for the next one. When Aki and Blue meet later... Sasuke might spot a blonde strand of hair, or they both might recognize their kiss.... *daydreams for a while* #please excuse me. I just like to let the author know what's going through my mind from time to time while reading their stories ^^# I've been reading so many angsty and Tragedy related stories that I seriously need something like this. I can't bear to read anything else that end w/ Sasuke being Killed or vice versa. Btw, every time they moaned in their little pleasurable states, I thought you'd may have one of the two (or both) unconciously gasp out the others' name. But it didn't happen. oh well.


Have a Nice Day ^^





~Redwitch05 ^.~
person Bunta-chan
schedule April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO!!!

DAAAAMN that was hot. Sasuke *cleans up pool of drool* he can dance and sing for me any time!

I really love your story. It's so fun! I look forward to every update. This one did not disappoint at all. Though, I'm anxious to see what happens next!

And Neji... poor guy. I would really like to see how you develop Neji's story. Is it going to take place in this story (no complaints here if it does!) or is it going to be a companion fic to this one (no complaints here either)?

Well, I'm off to write more on my fic, I can hear my readers and reviewers cursing my name hoping I'd update. LOL

Take care! Great update!
person DevilLived
schedule April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, I really enjoyed it. Kiba always is there to break the ice! Woot!

I wonder what's wrong with Neji? It was hard to imagine him singing but it was also very very cool.

So, Sasuke's dropping the hints and Naruto's slowly catching on. Wonder what's gonna happen on their little date! Update soon, alright?
person Reemu-Chan (not signed in)
schedule April 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The title of your fanfic caught my attention a few hours ago. So, like the curious cat I am, I read your story. It is supremely addictive. The way you write keeps me focused all the way through. Btw, that song that you mentioned, "Get Down, make love", NINE INCH NAILS sing it. I just looked it up ^^
I love how the dream came out. I seriously thought it was real up until it said Naruto jolts awake. I never even thought for a second that it was a dream, which really surprised me. I'm always the one that writes dreams out like that. Anyways, I love the way you worded out their love making. Would you call it love making ^-^*? I am convinced that Sasuke probably knows that Blue is Naruto. Hence the color of his eyes ^.^ okay, I'll stop my rambling. I enjoy your story so much. Can't wait for the next chapter. btw, ummm.... ok, I got a lil dramatical during the dream. Remember when I said that I thought it was real? yeah.... *looks away embarrasedly* I started crying when he pushed Naruto away from him and said that he never had him to begin with. T.T




~Redwitch05 ^.~
person Monkey Lady
schedule April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I like this fic, but I desperately want to see what happens now. So Naruto hugs Sasuke, Sasuke realizes he's Blue, and then....then? Keep going. I'll check for more later. Good fic! :)
person DevilLived
schedule April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, did Sasuke figure it out?! I wonder what their reactions will be!

The dream was very well done, I thought it was real for a second, good thing it was a dream! Sasuke and Naruto's interactions are cool to read, I like how you make it that they keep getting little dregs of deja vu! Very well done.

Update soon, okay?
person Ran-chan
schedule April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I really like you story. It's well written and addicting; full of live, with a little angsting and hot!
I can't wait to see what's going on. Has Sasuke realized? Or did Naruto sneak into Sasuke's bedroom last night and heard him talk in his sleep about 'Blue' and is now pressing his hard-on into Sasuke? *snickers* Ah well, I'm really an impatient person, because I can't wait to find out. *whines*
Bye-bye
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
tell me that sasuke has figured it out. i cant wait to see what happens next. keep up the great work.
person Bunta-chan
schedule April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BAH!!! Bah Bah BAH!!!

Loved the chapter! But, BAH!! Why end it with Sasuke's revelation?? If it even is a revelation yet? AH!! The cliffhanger... it'll be the end of me! ^-^

Anyway, I love how fast you're updating. Your story is very enjoyable and look forward to updates.

Until next time!

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