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by akashicrecord

person gwoman
schedule May 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is great!!! i'm really excited to see what happens with itachi, and of course sakura and kakashi. please update soon!
person Aihythil
schedule April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how long I have looked for a fanfic like this! I just screamed when Sakura got pregnant!! A Kakashi/Sakura/Preg Fanfic!!!!!
This is great! Love it alot, alot, alot!!!!!!!!! So keep up the good work!!! :) I really love this one! ;)

Thank you! / Aihythil sorry for possible grammarmistake... Im from Sweden... ;)
person Saya
schedule April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool, Cant wait to read more.
person CianaRui
schedule April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Some interesting developments in this chapterlett. I am really interested to see what develops with Itachi since he seems to refuse to write Sakura off so easily [smart man, that]. Also, You have done an excellent job of bringing out different facets of Kakashi. I love the lazy porn reading sensei-- but I like this new depth to him as well.
Keep up the great work and I hope the writer's block dies a speedy death. More KakashixSakura!! =)
person jennjennr
schedule April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea, you updated! I liked it, it was short but I liked the insight into Kakashi's feelings. I also really liked looking into Itachi's mind...it was unique, I've read alot of stories about him, but this is very unique in the way you wrote his thought...they were all planned out and very methodical, thought out, like the genius prodigy he is, I really liked it. I can't wait till the next chapter...the big fight...O.o I hope it all works out alright...Thank you for writing, and for updating and I look forward to another update...^-^. BTW I made you do the happy dance? Oh I am so glad I made you happy!
person Chelsey
schedule April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm a huge fan of Kakashi/Sakura het. And honestly this and only two others are interesting enough for me to read. I love the fact that your hubby is going to write with you! As far as age is concerned I'm 19 and quite old enough to read this. :D Anyway give Redsliver and HisBeautiful's Bible of Lemons a read if you wanna see some of my stuff. Most of my early work sucks but if you wanna read it to tell me if any of it is salvagable. I'm under HisBeautiful. I'll keep reading your stuff and check your profile for more, I love your writing style. Oh anf are you on fanfiction.net by chance? I'm on there too and a lot of authors have different non-smut stories there. Just checking. Update soon I love it!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

ps- I'm in my freshman year of college and have had little time to update any of my stuff. the ones to be continued and bettered by far are Rose of Uchiha, La Belle Rosa, and my original piece (that's not online at all yet; in fact I only have a sentence written; damn art school) Eyes of Eirne.
person jennjennr
schedule April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea I finally had enough time to sit down and read the whole thing! and I loved it! I will always love Kakashi and Sakura as a couple, I don't know why but the dynamic between them is amazing, and in this story its no exception. I love all the little plot twists you have thrown in here, and I really can't wait to see how this turns out...an she's been kidnaped...yes I love plots like this....maybe I'm just a hopeless romantic posing as realist...but I really love it :D I can't wait to see the confrentation! and what will Naruto and Sasuke think, will they ever make an apperance? I think Naruto should, but I'm not too sure about Sasuke...sometimes I can't decide if I like him or hate him...oh well Thank you for writing this and I can't wait till you update.
person Zelha
schedule April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well written!!!!
I loooove it, I beg you to update ASAP!!!
;D
person allyluv
schedule April 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome! i absolutely loved it.

more updates please!
person Ozzgirl
schedule April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story rocks! your story is the main reason I still visiting this site- I can't wait to read the next chapter!

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