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Wah a new devlopment! Itachi likes her! oh my how interesting...now I really love you! Hehe this is such a wonderful story, I really love the characterization, and I love how you have written Itachi's thoughts...they seen really true to character. I love the plot, and I love the way you and your husband write. I can't wait to read the next chapter, I really liked how he had written the previous time, and I can't wait for the big fight scene. Thank you so much for updating and I hope you do so again soon.

OMG!!!!! Itachi is such a fractured, complex pervert-- I am intrigued. And the idea that he might be just a tinnny bit covetous (sp?) of Sakura for his own purposes [some of which he probably would never admit to in a 1,0000 years] makes it even better.
Great work and I look forward to the next update. More Kakashix Sakura + Itachi, please.

Gah! I love this story! I like the way that Kakashi finally came around to the idea of other people knowing about him and Sakura. I loved the whole pakkun saying "you don't have to ask"...so sweet. It's weird. After reading the last chapter, I, myself feel protective of that baby. Itachi I will break off your arms and beat you to death with them if you harm that friggen baby! sorry...Great flippin story! eagerly awaitng your next chapter.

good so far, but I hope that baby stays alive. Hope the writing is going well, update as soon as you can.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

It looks really good and i can't wait until the next chapter^^

Poor Kakashi, having to worry about Sakura. Especially since she is pregnant with his child. I just hope that they reach her in time. Before Itachi does something to her.

Hmmm a trap. very intriging. (I know thats not spelled right oh well) Hopefully you dont plan on killing anybody, well besides Akatsuki of course lol. I have a question How exactly does Sakura feel about Kakashi up to this point? I mean we all know now that he realizes what he wants. But I don't really know where she stands as far as staying with him or not. I also feel kind of bad for Shino but I'd rather Kakashi have Sakura. Can't wait for the next chapter.

It's really good so far. Only one thing to mention, it keeps changing from past to present tense. That's the only thing that takes away from the chapter. Great work keep it up! I hope you update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

Yea! An update. Very interesting, and well thought out, so the whole cave thing was just a plot? That was very well thought out, and also very interesting to read, alot of sences like that are hard to read and way too drawn out to be engaging for the reader, but this was very well written and very engaging. You and your husband are a very good team, this was excelent. Ah poor Shino...you should set him up with someone at the end, the poor guy he never catches a break. Well once again very good chapter, and thank you for updating, and I hope you can do so again soon, thanks.
-Jenn

Excellent an update. You totally made my day when you updated your story. I had been reading it with a friend at their house when I first ran into so thats why this is my first review. I really like the way you have Kakashi thinking. I can only wonder at the moment what Itachi is actually going to do to Sakura but hopefully Kakashi can get there in time. I hope the writer's block skedaddles soon 'cause I wanna read more!