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for The Fragile

by akashicrecord

person Jovianwolfgirl
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, NO! How could this happen? The kid is Kakashi not Itachi! AHHHH(Wave hands around wildly). I hope Sakura or someone notice the changes! Update soon!
person CianaRui
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Geez, talk about ominous. Is Itachi changing the kid's dna or chakra signature to match his own? That would be cruel to both Kakashi and Sakura, but an interesting twist in the story. Gotta love Itachi though, twisted sicko. The relationships are growning and twisting into intricate and decieving patterns. I am interested to see where the story will go from here.
Also, I must say I giggled profusely at Akamaru's attack-- how ironic that his special would be to use the guy as a hydrant. Snicker**
Keep up the great work and post more soon.
person Pkitty
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I hope for more soon.
person Daniella
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! Great story! I love it, please update soon! I got to know what going to happen next.
person mel
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this story! Great action and a good plot to boot. Well done. Please update soon.
person moodiful819
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. Plz continue!!!!!!!
person Ox King
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I'm glad I was able to stumble across this story. This is a great Kaka/Saku fic. Thanks for taking the time to write. New chapter soon. Thanks.
person raeshi
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading all 13 chapters. I really like the series. Can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder what Itachi will do with Sakura. Till next chapter
person Anon
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome stuff. I'm impressed and pleased as always. Update as soon as you get the chance!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person jennjennr
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoo another update! Wow I really thought you were going to kill Shino on me...and wow Hellbent...(right?) that was an awsome fight scene. it played to all of the character's strengths, and was very spell bounding, once again the action just drew me in. Great original character, and beliieveable jutsus, and overall just great chapter. I thank you both so much for writing a wonderfull story, and I can wait till the next update...oh you promise me Itachi and Sakura moments...(you can't see it but, I'm drooling over here.) :D. Well once again thanks for an awsome update.

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