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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice, very nice. very descriptive and well written keep it up
schedule
April 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.this is awsome. i do hope you finish it and don't just leave it hanging like. that. I'm very glad that legilmyth pointed it out to me. look forward to more. ^^
schedule
April 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say you have caught my interest I am very much looking forward to the continuation of this story.
I loved the detail I could see and feel everything that was happening.
Keep up the good work.
I loved the detail I could see and feel everything that was happening.
Keep up the good work.