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I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! This is one of the best fics i've read in a loooooooooooooong time its so good I ............ can't describe in words how great it is. I have a small favor everytime you update could you possibly alert me? I don't surf AFF that often and i don't want to miss anything. Thanks for the great story!!

amazing story, can't wait for the next chapter :)

This is an excellent story so far. It is a well written story that proves that not all the stories on AFF have to have a lemon in every chapter. In fact this story to my knowledge hasn't had a lemon throughout the whole thing. I enjoy that and the depth of this story. It is amazing to see all the time and effort you put into it. I love the pairing of Naruto and Temari because if there are any more besides yours that last past a one shot it is just not well it has a few to many lemons in them. People read stories to get a good story not just a description of a scene in which they can probably imagine themselves. Your story is probably one of the best I have read so far on AFF and maybe even FF.net. I hope to read your update in the future and I am pleading with you to continue this story it is just excellent.

Anacalyptic

P.S That is my pen name on FF.net I am currently working on a story and it will be my first on FF.net maybe you will check it out when I decide to post it.

If you dont finish this this story ill kill you in your sleep

gahhh 2 weeks sine update T-T, i so utterly despise waiting. oh well keep up the great work.

plz update soon! i really love this fanfic! it's one of my all time favs!

Jon

I have to admit that this is one of the greatest fan fictions that I have ever had the privilidge of reading, and I hope that you decide to continue it for sometime still.

I just hope you don't kill Lee off.

P.S. you have my vote in the NFA polls

Hey Great update I like how everything is starting to come together and I hope Gaara and Shukaku don't do anything to bad when trying to find something to eat and what will happen to Temari and Naruto and could Temari's child be a part of the Hatake clan.. Who could get rid of the tainted clan members and what is going to happen to everyone.. An send me an e-mail at JTB8834@aol.com if you can please... Love the writing that you have done

it was great i can't wait for the next chap.

omg i love this story! plz plz update soon! i love reading this! at first i would have never thought of naruto and temari as a good pair but your story makes it sound like they would be perfect for each other! you are such a wonderful writer! i hope that someday you'll get to really publish something, like a book, and i can read that! plz keep up the good work!

Jon