rate_review Reviews

FINALLY, I got to read more of this... I was like really annoyed when I first read the first chapters and then Aff had their 'downtime' and then the 'move' occurred... Anyways, I really love your story, even though I usually don't like fanfictions where Naru-chan's stroger than Sasuke.. :/
Lovely plot (this far) and great sex *giggles* Keep up the good work ^_~

Update Soon, ne?
Ja~

ohh come on why do u have to let it end there ... man...... I hope u update soon pls pls pls pls update soon

i think this one of the best fics i've ever read by why did u stop where u did u got me all excited then stopped right when the juicy stuff was happening man that just ain't right lol but seriously i really and hope you update soon please please see you got me beggin like a kid lol :-) ja

this story rox plz update i LOOOOOVE IT.

This is great I love it and I hope to read more ^_^

Oh my!! I really like this story! It was a little slow-moving at first (or maybe I'm just too used to reading action-packed fanfics...) but overall it's very well-written. As much as others might disagree, one of the things that I like about this story is that there isn't so much yaoiness that it's completely unrealistic. Don't get me wrong, I'm a total yaoi lover, but when a simple 'I love you' suddenly turns into hot sex, it's a bit unbelievable. The way that you've written your story (although I don't normally like 'smarter but hidden from everyone' fanfics) is very believable and kept me continuing through the chapters. Update soon!!

Sweet story! and Sasuke just kissed him GREAT! Can't wait for Naruto's answer, Plez update soon!

i really like this story...i LOVE it when people write stories about naruto being really intelligent but just hiding it from his team. i think in teh cartoon he is alot smarter then people give him credit for. plus SASU/NARU just makes it that much better. i can't wait to read what is going to happen next...GOOD LUCK!!!

Omg,

I have an 8 o'clock class in the morning, and here I am, almost 3 AM reading your story. BAH!!

Needless to say, I like it a lot. I like the Naruto you're developing and Kyuubi. Damn, she's hot.

Keep it up! ^^ I was very happy when I started reading thinking I would only read 2 chapters, but then more chapters were added while I was reading.

Take care!

great update! It was so funny how everyone is shoked silly in this chapter! can't wait to read more, so please update soon!!!