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hmmm... intresting, but i don't get who will be the pairings in the end. i kinda get what will happen in the next chapter. hehehehe...

I've always though that yellow roses mean jealousy...
What is funny, this interpretation also fits the story :)
You doing a great job, Shika seems so.. I don't know how to put this, he is almost like I always though he should be (that is in my twisted mind :) )
I hope this story will continue soon :)

That... Friggen rocked!

I loved the part with the flowers and the way Shikamaru picked out one for Kiba. Yes, this chapter had a bit more angst than the others, but it worked out well, I enjoyed it. You have to have some problems here and there in a story.

I totally think you should make Shika and Kiba a couple and if it will be a long and hard road, well, I don't care! The more drama the better I say! :D

So update soon, alright? That cliffhanger really left us clinging onto the edge and I can't wait to find out if we fall or climb back up (whoa, weird metaphor right there). Keep it up!!!

hmm... the scene with sakura is kinda good and does the pairing really stick to the end??? or there are others??? hehehehe update soon.

One word: Wow... Wowdidiwowow.AWESOME job!

You write Shikamaru so well, you're like the... the... Shika-Queen or something. If you can't own Naruto, might as well own him!! :D

I loooved this chapter, it was very well done. The flashbacks were cool, I liked how you put them in. The ending wasn't too angsty, least I don't think so.... I am an angst lover so I guess I'm a bit biased. I liked how you wrote Shikamaru in that last scene with Sakura, you really brought out his character there.

Anyways, I'm going to stop ranting. I tent to rant if I really like a story, so pat yourself on the back!!!

What's going to happen with Shika and Kiba???? Update soon!!!!!!!!!

wow good lemon. kinda bad for a chapter ending, but hope to update soon.

Reading this has made me soooo giggly! I absolutely adore Shika X Kiba-ness! I've only gotten to read the first chapter and I love it! I'll definately be back to read at a more reasonable time (it's almost 2 in the morning and my brain is totally messed up lol). I <3 U!
P.S. If you're looking for some good stuff, in the next few weeks, I'll be putting up a ShikaKibaNeji fic! *droolz*

Awesome chapter, I loved it. The lemon was fine, so don't worry.

I thought the whole scene with the store was fun-- 'cept for the part with the brothers doing it.... that kinda weirded me out because I imagined them being overweight hairy guys. :S


Anyways, great job and update soon!

Well now that was really hot ^_^ Grr this is like my favorite naruto ff on this site lol. Shikamaru and Kiba are so sexy lol you should totally have someone else "walk in on them and join" *cough cough but not Neji cause he is scary looking and not very sexy lol sry I too am an insane little pervert lol I love your story it's just so great and i'm really glad that unlike many people you actually update quickly. Could I fall for a better story lol Great job ^_^

Thank you thank you thank you!!!! ^_^ I was waiting for that to happen lol. You really are a great writer. Cant wait for chapter 5 ;P