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Filler episodes s**ks :)
yet still there is a hope for this story :)
just give us some action with Shika and Kiba :)

woo i loved this chap!!! haha go drunken naruto!! and omg sasuke and even neji too o.O wow who would of thunk it? lol anyways poor shika and kiba xD such an unsteady errr relationship i guess i can say since they both have feelings for one another..*sigh* so troublesome indeed..love what can i say ^^...hope to see more..update soonish ne? :D ja!!!
--ruby

Hehe, loved this chapter. Drunken Temari is so entertaining, though I guess Shikamaru would definetly think differently. It must be good now that he's out of the hospital, though.

Don't worry about the famers or lack of reviews, this story is great and if they can't see that then screw them!! :D:D

(sigh) You write Shikamaru so well, I don't think I've ever read a better written Shika any where else.

Anyways, awesome story so far! Keep it up!!!

Woohoo another chapter of this .... that wa a nice surprise to get when checking over AFF for stuff to read.

I love how ... disgruntled Shikamaru is, I can't think of a better word :) and everyone's interaction is awesome

Kyaaa i lubb shikamaru!!!! *cuddles him* i so loved how you portrayed him in this story its freackin awesome! that is so how id see him in a few years ^^ you did a good job a bit OOC for kiba and shino but still..besides that i hope you finish this story it would please all of us..youre just too much of an awesome person not to! -.-..especially how well you make shika-kun seem and act and everything Dx...hope to see more in the near future ooo i so no his lazy ass will come to the conclusion that hes fallin for kiba..id never see him falling for neji thurr too smart for eachother haha..ja!
--ruby

Loved how you wrote this chapter and I really enjoyed how you started it :D. Everyone lovessss Temari!

Can't really think of anything to say, but I guess it's still early so I'll use that as my excuse. Loved the chapter, great job and I hope you update soon! (man, that even sounds boring to me! :( )

wahhh cliffhanger!!!! hmmm.... i think that shika will live, else its going to be a sad ending. hmmmmm..... hope to update soon.

That was really.. Really good! The battle scene was done very well! I have trouble with writing action bits but you make it seem very easy.

The last part with Shikamaru's thoughts about death were really realistic, I think that if anyone was in his situation, or dying for that matter, they would be thinking the same thing.

You're an awesome writer and I think you write the best Shikamaru I've ever read.

And you left us with a killer ending - that was one hellava cliffhanger my friend. I'm on the edge of my seat and I'm afraid I will fall off soon and bash my head on the computer moniter and get a concussion so update soon!

YAY!!! I know, i'm a bad reader for not reviewing earlier, but i just got done reading the recent update! YAY!!! please continue! Kiba is my favourite character and shikamaru is pretty close but i never thought of them together...well anyway, keep rockin' it!

man that was frikkin awesome and i really hope kiba dumps shino and goes with shika and shika stops acting like an idiot and just follow what he feels inside even he doesn't what he feels inside because he "conflicted" lol but anyway hope it turns out in the favor shikaxkiba