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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was amazing... I wish you would update soon...
sorry If Im being pushy...
take your time
sorry If Im being pushy...
take your time
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*moans about no new chapter recently*
You know I love this story, right?
I stumbled across a post on my Live journal where I recomended this so had to re-read the latest chapter and you need to get a livejournal and join the writing community I started over there. You're like the only person all 3 of us mods were like, Yeah! that story rocks, and then went... uhh ... no live journal though -- damn!
And TemariXTenTen is strangly ... nice.
~ScribblesITM
You know I love this story, right?
I stumbled across a post on my Live journal where I recomended this so had to re-read the latest chapter and you need to get a livejournal and join the writing community I started over there. You're like the only person all 3 of us mods were like, Yeah! that story rocks, and then went... uhh ... no live journal though -- damn!
And TemariXTenTen is strangly ... nice.
~ScribblesITM
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. This is my first time reading a KibaShika pairing (hopefully) and I think I'll go search for more because of you. Please put them together. I'll love you.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have not read such a great story in my life. PLEASE for everything that is lazy and smart UPDATE SOON! If you dont I think I will die. Really. I love your writing style, and I love the whole concept of the story in general. On top of everything great about the story...it is my fav. duo Shika, and Kiba. I didnt find this ANYWHERE else. So to sum my opinion up on this fic... It is now called "The Bible" for me, I must worship it... not in that creepy way though. Please update.
Later...
-Y.Ashaigia
Later...
-Y.Ashaigia
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still loving your story. But I think it moves too slow. I have been desperately waiting for some hotness between Shika and Kiba but it's just not happening. I think it's dwelling, gnaging and swelling too much. Or maybe it's just me. I think they really should act on it, 'cause they were so strict to the point in the first chapters and now they just can't get into it. But I really do love the way you write otherwise :) Please update soon!
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OYFG! This is just way too HOT! I've only read the first four chapters and WOW! I love how you write Shikamaru's thoughts and descripe everything that's happening. I'm so glad there's still seven chapters for me to read tonight. I actually laughed when I read the A/N in the end of ch4. I've had the same feeling of Jaw drops. I can’t BELIEVE I just wrote that… I love that your taking your time with them. Enough of me commenting and on with the reading. I'm just so happy, happy, happy for this story. And I love this pairing. OK, now I go...
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOh, I was so happy when I found that you updated! I literally squealed (and my mom gave me a weird look...)!
A great chapter, you use your words really well and everything has a sense of flow. I wasn't really surprised with the Temari/Tenten pairing, I think I've seen it before. They're a cute couple.
I wonder what's going to come out of this A-ranked mission?? Update soon!
A great chapter, you use your words really well and everything has a sense of flow. I wasn't really surprised with the Temari/Tenten pairing, I think I've seen it before. They're a cute couple.
I wonder what's going to come out of this A-ranked mission?? Update soon!
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story so far i've never really thought of shikamaru and kiba being a together but after reading your story they are now one of my favorite pairings.
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is very well written, and although I think you may be making sheika a little too emotional, I can sorda ignore that. but really I love this fic, and the whole thing gots me leanin towards a threesome... I mean I like the shino/kiba pairing, but I also like the way you have the sheika/kiba relationship going... Threesome, Please? Hehehe, yep definantly going to keep an eye this story, great work and update soon! *Runs off to read more yaoi*
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must update, quick! It's too amazingly, hott, not too!
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