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for Down Boy

by babyjam

person RyuichiSakuma2
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha. I love it. More please! :D

-Ryu <3
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XP hahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa naruto is soooooooooooo clumsy and forgetful! update!
person blisblop
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is starting well but if you are a reveiw whore I want my words worth!I like your dialogue and the guys interaction,stop looking at my dick.Tre bon.
person daria
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wickedly funny without going over the top. I've got a stitch in my stomach now from the laughs... albeit a good one! XD''''' It's not flawless but it's a good try, I thoroughly enjoyed it and am looking forward to the next chapter.
person Vox
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Funny ^^. But next time, less descriptions and more plot.
person Reyn
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LoL. I love how Naruto is jest a total dork in this. Great job.
person tsusami
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROFL! That was excellent. I loved your interpretation of naruto. Please keep it up.
person Piikki
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, good start! :D Love the way both guys stay in-character troughout this first chapter. Keep it up on this good level, and this fic is pure gold.
person Seto\'s Darkness
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*rofl* this one's good! :D reading your summary, it seems that this would be a torture-Sasuke with Naruto's sexiness fanfic, but Naruto's POV is priceless! :D I love it! This one has the right mix of humor, sarcasm and they're still in-character XD Naruto's very giddy when Sasuke-kun agreed to their "real date" :P I've realized that you've got many reviews ^___^ so... I know that I'm not probably the first one to declare this, but you've got a FAN! :) Keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next update, and hopefully it would be... longer and hotter :P

SasuNaru rules :)
person MeLaiya
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, i love how this started out. keep up the good work and udate soon.

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