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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kyaa ^^ I didn't know that you wrote any stories. This one is so cute =^-^= And short. I liked how you did it. Such a wonderful sequel. That and b/c I love Narusasu so much.
~Ria ^.~
~Ria ^.~
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahah, just as good as "Whoosh". I loved it muches and muches. Thank you for writeing a sequel.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG It's so awesome!!! Flirty-yet-not-girly Naruto is just what I love!!
I'm a bit tired with all that seme-uke relationship so your fic is like a breath of fresh air in today's fandom!!!
Keep up the great work!
I'm a bit tired with all that seme-uke relationship so your fic is like a breath of fresh air in today's fandom!!!
Keep up the great work!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EF yes it was hot!! ...What do they call a third part of a story? ...Tri-quel? Tri-quil? ...Eh, give us all Part III!!!!!!! *puppy eyes* I'll bake you kyuubi-shaped cookies? *shifty eyes* What! Just 'coz I'm a guy doesn't mean I can't cook! ... Uh, anyway... more.... ^_^
*Camui*
*Camui*
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aweeee! Much better this time! However, again, you've mislabeled your fic. In your warning it said 'Yaoi', this is incorrect because yaoi fics are lemons or at least implied lemons. However, it was a cute shounen-ai. I have a suggestion though, add 'Dobe' to your original One-Shot 'Whoosh' as a second chapter. It'd be much better if you kept the two together.:D
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i thought it was cute and hot... i'm glad u made a sequel to Whoosh cuz that one left me confused.... is there going to be another part to this one?
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*loves it* Thank yous!!!!!!!!!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was yummy yep total yummyness you should consider writting a sequal and name it
"the dobe finaly did the whooshee"
i sure as hell would read that one XD
love
looli
"the dobe finaly did the whooshee"
i sure as hell would read that one XD
love
looli
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THat was fun. I liked the interaction between the two. Nice job.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww. sasuke is such a pretty uke. great job! ^__^