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What a wonderful story! This is really well written and the plot is quite interesting. Hope to see more of your work, because it's a good story. Happy to know that Sai had his jaw broken 4 times. I really don't like him, even if he new in the manga, he really piss me of. Anyway, I'll be looking for your next update and continue your great job. Ja! ST

Good chapter! I think you have a great pace going here, it's refreshing when there is tension and uncertainty, rather than them automatically making out. Not that there's anything wrong with that...lol, but it's good to see a steady progression as well. I love that you put in Sai! What a groping little bastard! Heh, I hope to see more of him, maybe a rivalry between him and Sasuke? That would be awesome!! Ooh, and so many possibilities of Sasuke getting the wrong idea and kicking Sai's ass! Yeah! Ok, getting carried away now, sorry! I just really love this story, and all the directions it can take from here. I can't wait to read the next chapter, really great stuff so far!

Yes, the boys have definitely grown up. Ya know, Naruto's reaction is very funny because he isn't the kind of person to hold a grudge and yet his brash side of his younger years would have tried to beat the shit out of Sasuke and THEN forgive him with open arms. Shows how they can change. Sasuke's lost, not sure how to react or to behave in a place that's so different and yet so much like it used to be. I feel for both of them. Are you going to give Sai a larger role, or at least throw him in somewhere? I'm kinda curious as to how Sasuke would react to someone that's a little too much like the Uchiha for comfort.

Yeah, I love how Kabuto was kinda a spy/traitor, but then you find out that he was playing Akatsuki for Orochimaru. Damn, if that guy isn't sexy when he's bad. Will Sasuke ever come back? I miss him so.

Can't wait for the next chapter. You're doing great.

GYAH!! i loved it! but no kissie kiss?! EVIL!! *points an accusing finger*
can;t wait for the next chapter! update soon!

I love these kind of stories when Sasuke comes back! UPDATE SOON!!!

update soon! i think this is great!

Wow! this is really good, I love it. Keep up the good work^_^

I completely agree with the review thing, it's crazy isn't it? Before you start writing, it seems like reviews aren't that big a deal. But once you become a writer, it just blows you away how much one review can mean. I'm writing my first story, and even a simple "Good job, update soon!" can lift my spirits. Nobody but a writer knows how much a review means, ever since I started my first fic, I review every story I come across.

This is a really good story, my favorite thing is the interaction between Naruto and the Kyuubi. It's hilarious, and done very well, and it makes me feel sorry for poor Naruto! What a little perv that Kyuubi is, heh. I feel kinda sorry for Sasuke, since his whole manor is gone, but it has put things into perspective for him. And now he gets to stay with Naruto...can we say sexual tension?? woot! :P I can't wait until the next chapter, you're doing such a wonderful job here!

I like it so please update soon!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ (but I kind of wanted Naruto and Gaara to be more then friends *pouts*)

-The Update Monster

Hi. I was just wondering which one will be on top on their firts time. Because I love sasunaru (I know this is Sasunarusasu or someting :D) and it'd be great if on their first time it'd be sasuke on top. But it's your call. Your story is very interestin and two chaps in two days is really good.. I cant wrote my own 'cause my visison of blocked for the moment. But keep up the goog work, ne? :D