rate_review Reviews

wow. I am loving the emotions in this!! I'm not a Sasuke fan, never will be, but I am a NaruSasu fan...so this is just...amazing ^^ I like the way you've described how Sasuke is feeling, it's very IC (even in an OOC situation). Like his exterior doesn't betray his emotions and feelings...interesting...and the Naruto :o wow...interesting way you've written him! I can totally see that he's surrounded by all these people and enjoying it! lol but it was still funny when towards the end of Chapter 1, his cheeks were 'tinged pink' haha..funny-cute. Lovin' the way you write this~ I'm sure as more chapters come, your writing style will flow better :) Good job!

my god! never seen a fiction w/ sasuke at the receiving end! please do go on! I'll support this fic truly!

Wow.... let me say that again WOW!!! that was really good I like the attention you brought to the characters but, it seems like Sasuke is a little too passive is he going to go after Naruto and prove to him who he is? just curious since I like the SasuNaru pairing amongst others. This story definatley has me intreaged and I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the Great Work JaNe XD

I think you should continue. But if you don't want to, the way the chapter ended brings a nice conclusion. Naruto could fight to have Sasuke back. It's seems like in most on the stories, Sasuke is the one trying to win Naruto's affection. This could be different. I like different. Either way it's your choice.

Oh, I like it. A difffrent attitude for Sasuke. Most AU's have him using Naruto. Nice switch.

Lovely!! Hm, I can tell this has the stuff to get me addicted, and FAST. It would be interesting to see another chapter with Naruto's POV, unless you don't feel like blowing the plot out of the water just yet.
Continue please! How fast do you update?

cheers!~

I like this story and how it's coming along. For once somoene wrote about sasuke being the used instead of being the user. I never understood how people seemed to always make Naruto the pitiful victim. He's anything BUT pitiful and he refuses to let himself be a victim. You didn't make Sasuke pitiful, or victimized (even though he's my favorite child-trauma victim) but set in a hard situation, which if common/expected of his character. It seems that Sasuke has fallen into something with Naruto and pulling away hurts him just as much as staying in it. Poor Sasuke. Does Naruto realize what he's doing, or is he being his usual oblivious self? Very well done, I like the vague yet potent imagery from the beginning of the story about Sasuke and the bed. Very well done. Can't wait to read what you write next. ^_^

Oh, I never knew making Naru sad could feel so good. Fics always have Naruto's POV as the victim, but this is good. Yay, Sasuke grew a backbone!

O.O Poor Sasuke!!!!!!!!!! Naruto needs to learn how to deal with people!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon so I can see some more angstyness ^^ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster

I really like how this is going. More more! ^_____^

-Ryu <3