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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute, not bad. Try and do something different.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOoo, I like this very much. I'm not good with proper evaluating words, but who cares... Annnnyway, I like this story and the humor, I will deffinatly be back to read the next chapter!!
Can't wait for you to get post the chapters with some hot yaoi action :p (however many chapters away that maybe..)
5 stars YAY!!!
Can't wait for you to get post the chapters with some hot yaoi action :p (however many chapters away that maybe..)
5 stars YAY!!!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. The belly obsession is a little strange, but that doesn't mean I don't like it. I personally would of gone for the eyes, you know windows to the soul, but belly would of been my second choice though. I couldn't write about anything other body part obsession.