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O my god. YAY! it's an update! woho! and two chapters even! it's nice to have you writing again, it's, err... been a while. But it was two good chapters, and I wish you look with the writers block. so see, you haven't lost all of your reviewers.

Just came across this today once I figured out how the "search engine" works :D It is a really interesting story and I would love to see how it continues!!!

Sasuke needs to stop being a stupid basterd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He's needs to get smacked a few times and then I think we should kill Itachi!!!!!!!!! Lovely story by the way ^^!!!!!!!!!!! Please update uber soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

The Update Monster

.... You better damn well make Itachi pay for this!!!Grr!
Go get him Sasuke! GO NOW! I WANT TO SEE BLOOD DAMMIT!

It's been a while, happy to see you've updated. I always like so much your story. Hope that I'm not annoying you with this, but I really love your story. It's one of my favorites. I'll be waiting like usual for your next update and continue to write this fantastic story, it's really worth it. So ja and take care!

Ooooh, damned cliffhangers. Nice one.

What the hell is Sasuke doing?

He's so damn weak.

Silly boy. Fight for your man!

The end.

Now Im already staring to wonder why you don't get enough reviews... I don't think its reasonable for a fanfic this good to have too little review... I love your story, I love the angst, I love the plot, I also love the POV style... ^__^ keep it up!

Good. Very, very good. Brilliant, in fact.

So... FINISH IT!

Hmm. A very interesting story indeed ^^;; I'd wait for the next chapter!!!! :D This story is well-written, and it also makes me wonder how far could they relationship go with all these tests and happenings around them. I especially love how you write chapters in both their POVs :) Damn, you made me hate the host for the Two-Tails lol Nobody else should touch Sasuke-kun but Naruto! And same goes for Naru-chan. I'm glad that Itachi is here, but... yeah. I also know that he's evil... but... *twiddles fingers* I feel kinda uneasy seeing Itachi hurting Naruto that much >.< Though Naruto and Sasuke having some... uhh, concerns about the other not coming back to him, it's still pleasant to read. I only hope that things would end in a good way - no matter how uncharacteristic it might sound, seeing how the story is progressing o.O;; Still! I would really want a happy ending! Those two are subjected to too much pain and loneliness for their lives to end unhappily... And... I like and adore Itachi and all, but... Sasuke is still my most favorite character. I hope that Sasuke -even though just in this piece of magnificent fanfiction- would be able to kill that sly, sexy weasel XD

I can find nothing that would merit anyone to scream at you for wrong grammar, spelling, etc. But yeah. As with every story, of course there are always some minor mistakes that could be found ^^;; About the plot itself... umm, in the manga, they didn't succeed in taking Shuukaku out from Gaara, nor at taking Gaara away to wherever their hideout is located. Kakashi, at this point, managed to acquire a "different-yet-a-bit-lower-quality" Mangekyou Sharingan. Umm. And... yeah. I'm a bit confused about some things >.<

a.) Why WAS Naruto with Orochimaru, anyway? *thinking hard*
b.) Is Sasuke a member of the Akatsuki now? Why is with the Akatsuki? Does this mean that he also has those "Akatsuki rings" and the trademark black-and-red-cloud-designed cloaks, and the stylish purple-painted nails?
c.) Uhh. Kabuto is supposed to be a spy of... Sasori [the puppeteer] and he supposedly betrayed Sasori. So.. what's he doing here? *thinking... uhh...*
d.) I find it confusing that Itachi would allow Sasuke to be in their HQ. Isn't he aware that Sasuke WANTS to kill him? Very weird.

Those questions/info above. I hope they could help you in the improvement of this already-amazingly-written fanfic in any shape or form :P Gosh, my review is awfully LONG. But I hope you're still reading this babble. I really appreciate stories like this, probing into what could happen after the current arc. With the awful amount of fillers flooding us, it really is the best time to be anticipating some exciting things to happen, ne? Trusting your plot and imagination to give LOVE [and smut? XD] to the SasuNaru kingdom ^____^

Keep up the good work! *Lee's good-guy pose*

>> Seto's Darkness <<

It's me again. :) Umm. Ano sa, ano sa.... Erm. You're not gonna make this a Sasuke x OC and Ita x Naru, right???? *fearful eyes* T__T I really hope not. And... hmm. I think I forgot to mention it, but I really adore how the choker seems to "stabilize" Naruto's fears about Sasuke leaving him. And how the fox seemed to worm its way to Sasuke's heart, anchoring him to his feelings towards Naruto. Aside from the bitchy mood shifts from Sasuke, I don't think anyone's OOC.

I can see that Sasuke and Naruto trust, care for and love each other. :) I also hope that Itachi would quit being such an evil bastard [oohhhh. you're still as cute as ever, Itachi-kun! XP] and stop breaking Naruto. And because Naruto's my second most favorite character, it also annoys me seeing Itachi using genjutsu to catch Naruto off-guard [the pretending as Sasuke thing] and calling him "Pet". >.< It doesn't bother me if it's Sasuke doing it, coz I'm such a SasuNaru fangirl at heart.... ^____^

Anyways. :)

Ja'ne!

Seto's Darkness ^__^