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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ne, Hime chan, i just add you to my msn .
Wish you had a good new year !
i love your story . Sasuke here is cute too !
happy ending for all !
Wish you had a good new year !
i love your story . Sasuke here is cute too !
happy ending for all !
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had it beta'ed thanks to comixgal!! Sorry if the read before was a pain.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waiii.. so cute and sweet.. xD i lurve it.. awww.. =3
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a cute fanfiction, I enjoyed the read.
Naruto and Sasuke (more Sasuke) seemed a bit out of character though. But it is definatly a nice way to picture Sasuke's Christmas.
Naruto and Sasuke (more Sasuke) seemed a bit out of character though. But it is definatly a nice way to picture Sasuke's Christmas.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
losthimagain: I (1) LOVE (4) YOU (3)
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT!!! UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!! WITH LEMON IF POSSIBLE!!! U R SOOO GREAT!!!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Might I suggest a beta? I understand that you're not a native English speaker, and English is a rough language to say the least, but your voice is a little weak, and the grammer's kind of tough to get through. The story seems good enough, but I can provide a better crit when I'm sure what exactly you're saying. =) Keep at it though, your English is a hell of a lot better than the languages I pretend to speak! Good luck.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry. SInce there's no future chapter for this one I had to answer your reviews here.
Suki: Thank you for pointing out my mistake. I appologive if my grammar is terrible. I do have a wonderful beta but I posted this story in advance because it was kind of late given that it's already past Christmas. It was my fault but sorry anyhow but I appreciate the comments nontheless.
chibiboy: Thanks for reading and I hope I could finish the next chapter of GOI soon. I'm really way past due with updating that one. Arigato for liking GOI. Ja.
Suki: Thank you for pointing out my mistake. I appologive if my grammar is terrible. I do have a wonderful beta but I posted this story in advance because it was kind of late given that it's already past Christmas. It was my fault but sorry anyhow but I appreciate the comments nontheless.
chibiboy: Thanks for reading and I hope I could finish the next chapter of GOI soon. I'm really way past due with updating that one. Arigato for liking GOI. Ja.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What did the 143 mean???? I'm really confused!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Other then that it was really cute!!!!!!!!! XD!!!!!!!!!!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but you need to look over, or have some one else look over your stories.