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by godofcontradiction

person mgp
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So cute! Naruto is really acting uke. Ah, this chap reminds me of under the enemy's roof fic.
person MEMEMEMEMEME
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update...what r the pairings fur tis story?
person blood water
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've just started reading it and I'm hooked! hehe
*pleading eyes* when are you gonna update another chappie?

I rarely read AU fics for naruto but yours is very goOd..lolz

-blood water-
person blood water
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MAKE IT A SASUNARU FIC!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!

it is up to you but....*waves flag witht he words "SASUNARU" on it * ^^
person lulu
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you're story is turning out good... i prefer narutosasuke pairing
yes, i'm a reluctant conformist
its just that their relationship in the anime is lacking in yaoi
so narusasu all the way
person Hobbit
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! Please!
person Carrot
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Ya know I hardly write reviews but your story is seriously really good. I'm still 100% routing for SasuNaru, I think they just simple go together. Gaara and Naruto are more like brothers and Neji too. Well I think Sasuke just goes with Naruto, I REALLY REALLY REALY hope you make them end up together!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Everyone single fanfic I ever wrote on fanfiction had been a sasunaru, lol talk about obsessed?
Anyway, hurry the crap up with the next chapter.
person Tamara
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story...before i read your reviews to see what pairing it was.
I don't like Sasu/Naru anymore and it's just tiresome when Sasuke always gets Naruto...When he doesn't even deserve him.
I think in chapter 2 you got a good pairing there Neji/Naru...it makes more sense also Gaa/Naru too.

I remember one of your reviews it said that "if you make it Sasu/Naru then it will be are good story" but i don't think that true because if your gonna make Sasuke insult Naruto and make his life hell ( like other stories do) then Naruto choose him that would be kinda stupid don't you think?

Please be different and make it something else other than Sasu/Naru, i think teammate, co-worker, business partner etc shouldn't be lover b/c it will made it a bad situation if they ever break up...Sasuke and Naruto are more friends or brother in my opinion, now Neji is a much better person for Naruto, he only wants to see Naruto happy, all Sasuke has does is to call him names and even try to kill him twice!

I really like how you protrayed Sakura i really like your warning, i just wanna say....Thank you, she really isn't a likeable person and all the things she's done till now is just to get her Sasuke-kun back. I hate her lol

I really like your story and i hope someone gets to shut Sakura down for the bitch she is!
i'm really hoping for the next chapter, i just love AUs ;)
Oh yea a final note for ya :D :
Neji/NaruNeji/NaruNeji/NaruNeji/NaruNeji/NaruNeji/NaruNeji/NaruNeji/NaruNeji/NaruNeji/NaruNeji/NaruNeji/Naru!
person Mochi~
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is gorgeous this far darling. The cinderella plot is just lovely, especially with our Naruto boys, ne? ;D
And oi, a Sasuke x Naruto would be a must here. Those two are just meant to be together. Though I must say a Neji x Naruto wouldn't be wrong either.
Hope you may update this quickly even though school has started, darling!
*jumps off to caffeine land*
person Vox
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is just so damn cute. I'm voting for SasuNaru, 'cause I like to see Gaara paired with Lee (Sickeningly cute really) and as far as Neji goes... I just don't see him and Naruto together. It has this air of unrequited love, I think Naruto only sees him as his friend, not his potentional lover... Ok, all I really wanted to do was complement you for your good work. And I must say I like how you're putting Sakura as a bad guy, 'cause even if she shaped up after the time jump... I still see her as a complete bitch *shudders*
Anyway, please continue to write as well as you have until now!
Ja ne!

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