rate_review Reviews

Nice chapter, that got a laugh out of me! You;re updating better than most authors.

I would really love Kiba/Naruto action though, it's rarely anywhere. I would love you forever if you fit in a grope somewhere! (Kiba hitting on Naruto.. hehe)

I don't really mind which pair ends up winning, thoug i'm actually hoping it won't be a sasu/naru, there's to amny of them floating about. I'd actually love to see a good neji/naru or garra/naru fic out. Well, i'll keep reading though, whatever the pairing may be.

I love all your quotes...very clever! Hehe.

I think it's cute that Naruto writes to his journal and calls it Kyuubi. Interesting idea.

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Hello once again. Thank you very much for your reply to my review. As voting is officially started, I would like to cast my vote for NarutoxSasuke with the aforementioned angsty, stuck as the friend Neji. This chapter is yet another well written one. However, may I suggest a beta reader? I have noticed some minor grammatical errors throughout. Nothing really major or worth writing home about, but they are still there. Your and You're, There and Their, that sort of thing. Aside from that, I am really happy with this story. I can't wait to read on until it's completion. Take care of yourself!
Mitziginger

Wow that is so cool!!! I hope there's lots of comedy and good side joke for a point. Gomen nasai I am probably not make sense (laughs). I can not wait for you to finish this is a really good story *smiles*

awwww. i'm all for neji X naru!! keep up the great work!

ooooooo dark eyes staring at him?
Sasuke? i'm guessing?
whoooooooooo!!!
(Sasuke/Gaara/Neji) X (Naruto)
hehe, dat'd be good for me
mmmmmmmmmm *licks lips*

Voting commences now...Neji/Naru Negi/Naru Negi/Naru please there already enough Saus/Naru out there Neji needs love Too;)!

I love this story so far. And I dont think its moving to slow.. anyway my vote goes for a Naruto/Sasuke ..course that happens to be my favorite pairing LMAO