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person mitchy
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heya ni-- i mean.. cookie! i just finished reading your fic and it was GOOOOOOOOOOODDDD!!!! haha!... i really love that finger sucking thing! bwehehehe... update! update! update!! XD
person Reyn
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wah! It's too hard to find my name in the review replies, so I gave up.

Another wonderful chapter. I'm so glad it'll be Sasu/Naru! I especially like how Sasuke picked out the poem jest cuz it had 'blonde' in it. What exactly is that 'O Captain, My Captain' poem about?
person Ayden
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi again!! I was wondering about that anon thing, maybe it means anonym? It came to my mind, 'coz if anon is one person, he doesn't do anything but read fanfics(just read reviews and there is one anon somewhere, in all categories) and he should be suffering from multiple personalities! Those things I didn't like was the school life ( I think they are in Japan??) and Ino and Sakura really are noisy and annoying, ne? :D I think they all are little pit hysteric, but Kiba and co. are cool I think. It's good for Naruto to have friends. I was sooo dissapointed when Sasuke and Naruto was chosen as a couple. But, it was so obvious pairing, when having elections XDXD Well, you have to write Neji and Naruto pairing, pleeease?
person tsusami
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My personal fave is gaara/naruto, but I can see how the Neji/Naru works. It's cute, if done well. Kudos on the poem selection btw. I don't know if you're aware, but Shakespeare did really write that poem for a man. The first 100 some were written for a man and the dark mistress poems begin later.
person z
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! *happy dance* mwahahaha! Oh I'm just loving this story. Naruto so uke! and Sasuke is so Seme! mwahahahah! I love it!
person Seto's Darkness
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woohoo!!! :) Still proves that SasuNaru is the most canon of all the couples... *dreamy sigh* I like NejiNaru and GaaNaru to a certain extent, but... I only see them as... erm, "hindrances" to the SasuNaru love... sorry NejiNaru/GaaNaru fans -__- Anyhow, YAY! The SasuNaru has started!!! *chirpy mode* Now, I'm really going to look forward for the fic!!! I like how the way Sasuke-kun is *hinting* his not-so-platonic feelings towards the 'only blond guy' in their class :) Very sweet.

Nice writing style, and I specially admire the way you used the poem to *relate* Sasuke's... uhm, feelings towards Naruto! Plus, it made way to a good opportunity of Naruto feeling something towards Sasuke... Two thumbs UP! Looking forward to yummier updates... XD

*Support the SasuNaru LOVE*
person SasuNaruFOREVER
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hoh-hum. It'd surely be a great thing to do if Sasuke bashes Sakura -dazzling grin- That biotch is asking for it -insane laughter- Anyway, I hope that the later updates would involve Sasuke getting Naruto rather than Neji and Gaara straying in the way....... And Sasuke shooting down that big forehead is a big bonus too...

Keep up the good work. A truly magnificent plot, and I think you're doing the storyline justice!
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is Ash-chan with a account now. ^_^ Nice chapter... update soon.
person SimoneV
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, i totally loved the closing up line XDDDDDDD it was so hilarious, seriously. pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase update soon!!! I'm craving moooooorrrreeeeeee....
person april
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful yaoiness,, I've fallen inlove with you,, please update soon,,

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