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WHY!? WHY WONT U UPDATE!? WHY!?!!?!

Oh my! I have to say, I was devastated when I saw that you stopped updating back in January. This story really is quite good! I love your characterization of Naruto. His attitude is very entertaining, especially concerning Gaara, Sasuke, and Neji. I like that you didn't make Gaara and Naruto all friendly with each other overnight (well, Naruto, anyway), and that you're taking your time with the SasuNaru pairing, instead of having them jump all over each other just because Sasuke's interested. And Naruto and Neji just make me laugh. The scene where Neji laughed and Naruto told him he was beautiful was very sweet and well done. Truthfully, I don't mind the way you write Sakura. After all, it's a fanfic! The author is meant to do what he/she sees fit. Though in the story, I can't help but feel bad for her, being such a spoiled brat and unable to see what a terrific personality Naruto actually has. I'd love it if you could bring yourself to finish this~ You really have a gem going. <3
~Hoska

I love the rivalry between Gaara and Sasuke =] And the ever so calm Neji is so cool

The AU and slight OOCness of the characters are wonderful as well.

In fact..everything from the cliche plot and characteristics are lovely =] I love this kinda story. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Update soon =]

omg. gaaras the school punk! LOL! oh man, now i have images of gaara offering to give naruto a ride home on his motorcly. or maybe neji? na he'd drive a car but for some reason i keep thinking about what would happen it itachi and kisame and their gang took an interest in the blond. hm...?

I love it!!!Please continue,I want more!

Zomfg! Your story makes me so pleased!! It is so hard to find anything these days that is not poorly written or the same overused excuse for a plot. You manage to break out of the mold. AUs that are poorly thought out tend to be fairly to completely insipid... but I am a huge fan of well crafted, well written AUs, such as this...and there are so few of them! The only mild thing I have in the way of critique would be the fact that you stayed with the 'canon' pairing... but that is mostly just personal taste I suppose. Since it is an AU you have so much potential to get creative with character relationships, staying with the established pairs seems a bit shallow. I suppose we can thank your readers for that, certainly there are lots of SasuNaru fans out there, and it certainly isn't enough to stop me from reading a well written and entertaining fic. T hanks so much for sharing your writing with the good-fic starved children of the world! And can I just say... This fic delivers!

So... NaruSasu, huh? Alright, it's your story, but it does seem like a waste of a story with the lines:
'Naruto was pleased. Neji's face broke from his usual calm mask, his eyes crinkling faintly in mirth as his slow, hesitant smile took over to transform the beautiful porcelain face to life. He was beautiful. Naruto told him so.

"Am I?" Neji lightly wondered.

"Yeah, you're even prettier than the girls!" Naruto grinned. "Aww, is Neji blushing?!"'
in it. Anyways... Good work!

id like to see you explore this whole thing with narutos ignorence to city life and certian foods a bit.
for instance
neji offers to take naruto somewhere for lunch after (maybe after naruto thanx him 4 his first soda EVER!) and who should they meet there but susuke and his older brother itachi, who naruto starts crushing on almost right away.
and there you go, gaara, neji and sasuke all chasing naruto who has his first gay crush on itachi. FUN ALL AROUND!

DUDE! it just accured to me! you made gaara the local highschool PUNK!EMO kid! SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!HAHAAAHA! oh god! just watch as he trys to pick naruto up on his bike and gets turned down because he walks to and from skool with neji everyday now. and of course sasuke would just have to happen to be there and overhear.
RELEASE THE GREEN DEMON!!

(is released)

YYYYYYYYYYEAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! This story is ssssssssooooooooo hot!! I love love love it! Please make more friendship shika-kiba-naru and more SASU/Naru 'cause anyway it's the final pairing. MOre frienship neji and gaara. You could put them together....that would solve the problem...:P

Anyway...could you e-mail me when you update please? I love this story too much!