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Heh, this chapter was incredibly cute.
I liked how you added Miroku and Sangos name, that just added to the cuteness of the chapter
But I think my favorite part was when Sai copied Miroku in stroking Sakura's hair. It was like
"Oh Sakuras asleep, I can act how I wish I could be around her." It was a real nice touch to this chapter.
I am overly excited for the release of the book. Hmm I wonder what new drama is gonna come out of this one. heh
::Smirks:: you're like Tsunade with her sake. =_=
I should ship you alcohol in thanks for your lovely fanfics. ~_^ Heh, maybe I'll settle for a pretty fanart instead. lol
heh, thanks for posting. Can't wait for the next update.

Awesome chapter as always! I love the little escape you've cooked up. Sasuke tying Sakura's tent and the train scene were both priceless.

One thing I'd love to see happen, if it ever interests you to write it - a chance for Sai and Sakura to team up and verbally defeat someone. I love the tension between the two during their squabbles, but I bet they'd be incredible if they had to join forces.

I love the Kakashi bits, and I hope we see some more Neji later!

list of japanese names:

female:
haruno
haruko
akiko
chikalu
hitomi
umeko
yukiko
natsumi
natsuko
generally ending with ko

male:
yuusuke
sho-ota
ryu - unconventional but cute, dragon

I'm gonna be sad at the end of this aren't I? Damn Sakura and her womenly powers to attract men...I love Kakashi too!He is damn hilarious. Got ot love the guy. The Characters are just so intriguing and honestly very real but still keeping to their oringanl personas and situations as ninja.You really should be proud of yourself. Favorite part of this chapter was when Sakura owned all their asses ( or more corectly, their penises) with her threat. Haha I could actually see that happening. Poor Kakashi, always missing things. Update soon please!

Do you like SasuNaru? Cause that would really be a popular alternative if Sai got together with Sakura...

But even though I like Sai I'm starting to feel bad for Sasuke... GO SASUSAKU! =(

nice chapter. although I didn't really understand Sakura and Sai's behaviour in the beginning - weren't they suppoused to act as a couple? I don't know, it was just... strange. but later scene (in the train) was so cute... is Sakura finally developing some feelings for "the artist"? SHANNARO!! :D
yeah, as I mentioned earlier I really like Sasuke, but he's no fun XD go Sai! don't let him win!! XD
nevertheless - the very last scene, when Naruto convinces Sasuke about Sakura's loyalty, is great too. I like this supportive Naruto.
I'm becoming more and more addicted, I think ;]

Grace not graze,grace this world/earth.There are two more "sayings" said wrong but I'm hopefull they are typos.I stopped reading to tell you I LOVE this Sakura,18 and never been kissed is too much,really,even girls in convents get more action!However,you have a fan...like it or not.Ummm...I shall resume my purusal (sp)of your novella.

please please please please please please please please please please please please please update

I am totally enthralled in where this story is headed, so please continue your idea, and update as soon as possible!!!!!!!!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATEING!!!!! I REALLY REALLY LOVE TIS STORY!!! I JUST ADORE SAI AND SAKURA TOGETHTER!!!!! PLEASE KEEP UPDATEING!!!!!1PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!