rate_review Reviews

Its moving slow but it has potential.

Ooh, cool story, love vampires. love Sasuke. *o*
write more please

T.T OMG who told you, you can't write?? I have no problem understanding you! Disregard the crazy ppl and get writing!! PLZZ...Pretty Plz with Naruto on the bottom ^^ hehehe UPDATEEEE

WAH! Sasuke's gonna be a vampire?...Well, he IS pale enough to pass off as one XD Plz update soon! My sanity depends on it!...or at least what's left of it. Happy New Year!

Don't say that! Your not that bad that you should stop writting! I think this is very good and I like the idea you have I hope you continue with this story. It has great potential I can tell. If you worried about grammer and stuff then just take your time with it. After all no one's perfect and it is your story. Your writting this story for your enjoyment and because you want to share right? And to see how your idea will play out right? You should just have fun and XP to any one who say's differently! I personaly will be looking forward to the next chapter good luck, keep up the great work! Ja till next time! ^.^ Hope you read this and smile!

well that was different interesting

continue PLEASE!? *puppy eyes*

hey 1st hit and 1st review lucky me.

pretty good plot, but it was a little rushed, and the characters are a little ooc. Also is english your 1st language? cauz you are mixing up prepostitonal prases like there and they are.


any who like the idea, just more detail and don't rush it so much.

je ne

kit master

I like it, you should continue. It's a good idea.

NO YOU SHOULD DEFINATELY WRITE MORE!! i didn't mean for the last review to sound like a flame, just... constructive critisum. K but you really should write more


je ne

kitsune master no hentai