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by Trollmia

person nocturne
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, the baby scene was so CUTE! ^^ ::glomps sasuke:: that was ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE.

anyhoo.

uhm...I had something else to say, but I forgot what. --;
person Arisa
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! TEMARI AND HINATA KUDASAI!!!!!!!!!!!! x3
person Dream Wyvern
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::looks around:: Jeez Trollmia, am *I* the only one who wants you to do the yuri thing with Temari and Hinata?! Oh, maybe I'm just the first one to review after you asked, lol..
Gawrsh.
Well, I felt the hints when I was reading this earlier, and I think you could plausibly have a justified yuri situation here - too many who even *try* to "write" yuri sort of have the girls suck face for no reason. You've already built up to it, so I think if you feel it, you should do it. (Truth be told, I thought that's where you were going with this.) A tiny bit more of a subtle build-up may even be called for, if you want to do it *right*.
But of course keep all the BEAUTIFUL stuff for my poor Naru and his poor 'Suke, ee ee ee!
I'd really like to see it! ..Uh I meant the yuri there, lol.
(Though I wouldn't mind seeing Naru's butt.) ::pervs etc.::
- DeeDubya
person Legilmyth
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far, I usually don't read Yaoi but for yours I make the exception. All the girls getting together sounds just like what a bunch of my girlfreinds would do in that situation.
Keep it up, I can't wait to see what you have them come upwith next.
person eternalembrace (logged out)
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fun story! Update soon!
person Mija
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwww that was soo totally cute and funny, loved the inner Sasuke dialogue, too cute...and the way he described babies and bodily fluids and drool and the smell...*had me lmaooo all over da place* really great update I loved it, and it is soooooo totally cute to see hot guys being all cuddly with babies...sighs happily at image....anyhow have a great Christmas and a very safe and happy new year, till next chapter, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Sukara
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so funny. xD Update soon please. =]
person Just_me
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha. Oh, this is great. Tsunade wanting little Naruto's and being totally freaked out when she finds out the dobe likes Sasuke.... and OMG, Sasuke is creating a Sakura-syndrome (the inner-Uchiha). Haha. Please continue this. I like the story, the pairing and adore Aya and Ayame. Ja ne^^V
person Anne
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So cute!!! Really, both Sasuke and Naruto are adorable! I like it so much, really! I feel like seeing what's going to happen between them; SasuNaru couple is the best! Yeah! Oh, and how good friends are Sakura, Ino and company. It's amazing!
Anyway, I like it so much, so I hope you update it soon, please! See you soon! ;)

PS: Oh, and when you could, could you update that other story? I mean that called "Below zero". I like so much as well! (Especially SasuNaru and ShikaTsu pairings!). Thanks.
person kenz
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CANT STOP LAUGHING!
So cute XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD
continue please.

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