rate_review Reviews

I really like how the story is going on, but the different names are real distracting. It kept eluding my mind who is really who and I have to repeatedly scroll to the top to check again. I admit I have no such patience to continue on after 1 and a half chapter. But otherwise, from what I read so far, it is still a pretty good fic though.

Yes! First review spot is now snatched from someone else's clutches! Love your story; great plot, good style, and nice balance with description and moving the plot forwards. Hope to see more soon! Please!?