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Aww, I really liked it, although at a few spots the rhyme scheme was a little off, it was still way better than any poem I could ever write. I also liked the fact that this poem could actually fit several people, I know you only had one in mind but I can see it being several. I really liked the Rhyme scheme, but I almost wish you had kept the 'And i would wait forever' all throughout the paragraphs to the end... I understand why you didn't, but I think it could still have fit with the thought process. Anyway great little poem, thank you so much for writing it... now go update one of your other stories! :D

Hey, not bad, though I have to say that the rhyme (fogive me if I don't quite remember the proper terms for poetry) were a bit distracting. Still, a very nice little poem of hopeless love. Did you know that there is a fic in this section that's also called "I Would Wait Forever" by an author called MonkyLady?