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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was cool, but I think it would have been better if Sasuke was 15. I dont really know what age the characters are in the real series, or well I forgot. But at the age of 13 boys are bearly starting to hit puberty, so in my mind I'm thinking of Sasuke a confused child and Kakashi a serious pervert and pedofile. Even though its hard to tell, kakashi manipulated sasuke into it. If this was real Kakashi's ass would be so sued. I really liked the story though, I like this pair alot and you did a good job with them. I think Sasuke was a bit OOC, he would never beg for anything (he's too proud). But considering he didnt have much knowledge about sex I just ignored it. Keep it up and I hope you update, unless this was meant to be a one-shot
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg.....*diez* XD Sexy sexy sexy!!!! SasUKE!!!! <3 My fav! there isn't enough out there! And KakaSasu of all things?! *diez again* You made my day. lol
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's hot. More Kakashi/Sasuke stories please.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on 19.2!
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad! I thought Sasuke was a little OOC but that's just me. I liked how you had Sasuke begging. Sasuke begging is always cute. It really was told very well, and i only noticed a couple of spelling errors. The only thing i suggest is going back and separating the paragraphs so there is a space between them. Otherwise good job!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hell yeah, i can imagine this as a doujinshi! sasuke begging is always da best XD