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uwaa, but i wondering....how is it that the chara situations and names are almost the same as in the original series, and the names are all used at the same generation along w/ same looks etc? i kno i kno its fer the story but still... ALSO ALSO email me when you update plziz! my email is deannathx@comcast.net

Great Ch but is sasuke having memorys of his childhood or of a past life?

cant wait till ur next ch

AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! How cute!!!!!!!!!!! I really want to know the conction between the past and present though!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And todays my B-Day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just guess what I want...........(An update)^^

-The Update Monster

great ch but like u said it did seemed rushed update soon

attracted to naruto!! hell yeah! update! XD

*smiles kindly*
thats was cute...its like teh relived their child hood.

Great chapter

Nah, that's ok. It's not so short and I like fluffy SasuNaru, in the previous chapter there was more of others pairings, now that's just SasuNaru, I prefer. As for your other story, I hate OCs, they tend to take a lot of unnecessary place in the story, I think there is a lot of personnages in Naruto, no need to make more. So, well, I read the first chapter but I topped here. In this one there is no OC, so I'll continue to read it. Anyway, good luck! Ja ne!