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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person Curuma
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update woman! UPDATE!
Or i'll send my angry mob of farmers to your frontdoor!
person noahvearn
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
come on, please continue. i can't take it anymore. it is very intriguing and full of curiosity. wanna know what happened. \(^0^)/
person padoopadoop
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

I really wasn't expecting this story to be like this. It really kind of sucked me in (I read all the chapters available today). This was very enjoyable and I thought you did an excellent job of portraying the emotions of the characters involved. I look forward to reading more of this story.
person Nolah de Fanel
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't checked my favorite fics in a while. Wonderful, stupendous, yata yata. I can't wait for the update. **is grinning ear to ear** is the baby blond or brunette?
person tomoyo15
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHERE THE HELL IS THE 14TH CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>:-<
person Niara-kun ^-^
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!! i wuz so scared he wuz gonna hav a miscarriage or sumthin! now all tha important ppl kno! YAY!!!! ur AWESOME! THIS STORY IS EQUALLY AWESOME!!!

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C(( ) )O <---- LOOK! A BUNNY!!!!
(")(")
person Niara-kun
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oops...guess not [as in tha bunny]
person dumatrea
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have a very nice fic there! please update soon! i'm not really good with names either so i tend to dissappear when people arround me start asking for suggestions with names for babies...i don't like naming them either...just one of the fears i have... and you have a hard timethinking of one neh? GOOD LUCK!
person CassandraD
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What does Gaara have planned?
How is Sasuke going to get Naruto to come back to Konoha?
person PanPan
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story for about a month. And i love it! The best mpreg i've read, even though i've only read a handful. But... UPDATE!!! I've been waiting two weeks! Please. Also... are you gonna describe what the baby looks like becasue you didn't mention that in ch. 13 except for the color eyes. I hop you find a good name! I'll be waiting. Another one of your captivated fans.

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