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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person losthimagain
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is sooooooooooo cool!!!!!!!!! Please update soon ^^ *hugs* I want to know what happend so PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster
person nanomi
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! =3
...I can't wait to read what happens next! XDD
person Reikon-chan
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is going well... lemme guess... could Sayori be a traitor? Well, then... then again, I could be wrong. Keep up the good work! ^^
person naruke
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a story!!!! I just hope that you write more chapters to itand don't leave it unfinished!!!! OTHERWISE.. KEEP IT UP!!!!!
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor poor naruto... i hate that sayori-whatever bitch!!! *mega-uber-pout*
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! An update. I'm really enjoying this story.
person Nya!
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please post! I like your story! I know I'm not a very good critic, but still, post!
person Vulpus Mirus
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. So much angst and suspense, it's killing me. Please update soon!!! Great job with the P.O.V.
person Stupidity Unleashed
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO! (sobs) I want to read more! T.T As you can see, I like this fic. A lot. Why the hell is Sayori so mean to Naru-chan? Is she jealous? Oh, I'd love that. lol. I love the plot but only one thing bothers me...you use "than" instead of "then" a lot and it REALLY started to get to me, but I managed :) No hard feelings? Anyway, update ASAP and have a Happy New Year!
person nanomi
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh....Getting very interesting! ;D Keep up the good work!

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