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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person Jiro
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love Shika! He's so awesome. Great fic!
person Shingo the Pest
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was the best chapter yet. Something in the way Naruto had to slowly reveal himself, bit by excurciating bit was very captivating. My favorite part of the chapter was when Shikamaru asked/forced Naruto to say who the father was. I was extremely nervous about Shikamaru finding out. The way you wrote him was very accurate; Shikamaru would stake his loyalty with Konoha unless he understood and agreed with Naruto's reasons completely.
person Fan1
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great SasuNaru fic in the works.

It's great so far!

Poor Naruto, can you imagine being confined indefinitely? I'd run too.

I wonder what Sasuke will do when he finds out? He'll probably be somewhat glad since he won't have to be with the aggravating Sayori, but pissed that Naruto left without telling him anything.

Leave it to Shikamaru to figure things out. At least he won't do anything without giving Naruto prior notice.

And Gaara. Now that's a friend right there for ya. Willing to help Naruto no matter the consequences, may it even be starting a war between two villages. He won't even cave in to the fact that Naruto is around no matter how obvious it is.

I hope to read more. This is a great story that just makes you want to read more.
Keep it up!
person nette
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. well thats another person who knows naruto's secret. i wonder who else will show up and discover him there. cant wait to read more.
person Sir Magus
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im suprised Shikimaru didnt say anything about narutos situation bein "troublesome" but it was a very good chapter an i cant wait till u post the next one-hopefully it will be soon-(HINT HINT)! when will sasuke find out? how will he take it? god i cant sit still just thinking about it plz u have to update soon!!!!
person losthimagain
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! At I started freaking out when Shika was messing with Naru-chan but now I feel better! Thank you! Please update soon! ^^ I was so mad at Shika that I started yelling at my Temari! Then she got mad and that was fun!
person Neko-Chan
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, creepy ANBU with sunglasses ^^ Great chapter!! I'm glad Shikamaru's gunna help ^^
Hope you update soon!!!
person C.S
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I luv it. I am glad that Shikamaru is going to help, due to the fact that both Kiba and Shikamaru are my favorites. Also, I want to know who will find out next. Kiba`s got his nose but then the Hyuuga`s got their eyes. Anyway, this is a great story and I hope you continue with it. ^.^
person Shinigami24
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* NO way will Sasuke LET the bakayoru Council kill HIS kid! *rolls eyes* Idiots! A pity someone cannot go back in the PAST to the day Yondaime died and SHOW him ALL of Naruto's life from the day he was born up to NOW! Prehaps Yondaime WOULD think TWICE before sealing Kyubi into Naruto and DYING to leave Naruto on his OWN! I think IF Yondaime AND members of Naruto's family was ALIVE, Sandaime would have HELP into making Naruto's life better! And someone would have stopped Itachi before he went and killed the ENTIRE Uchiha clan! And Sasuke would have NO pressure and be able to make his OWN life choices! The Council might be able to overrule a Hokage-BUT can they OVERULE 2 Hokages?!
person Anna
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You can count on me to keep R&R! The chapter is great, please update as soon as you can, or I'll keep bugging the hell out of you until you do! >.> <.< ^_^

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