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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person Yujina
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT HAPPEN TO NARUTO? IS TSUNADE GOIGN TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPEN TO NARUTO?! OH PLEASS UPDATE SOON! I CANT WAIT! DO YOUR BEST!
person Neko-Chan
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg-that line about the flamable baby killed me with laughter, i just couldnt stop laughing!!! the image of a flaming baby was too much!!! *re-dies laughing*
Great chapter, man now im dying for the next one!!
person Shika-Chou
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have me hooked on this story :D

I love Gaara's character and how he protects Naruto. I'm hopeful for more Sasuke and hopefully he will be involved with the baby :)
Keep up the great work and I eagerly await more.
person SM
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You..you...left off with a cliffhanger..
How could you? O___O
I really want to see that next chapter. <3
I love the pairing.
person Darling_425
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one great story! The plot is great and you are a great author.
I would ike if it would be more obvious that Gaara likes Naruto, too ^_^
Keep writing!
person Fallen
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter I chaged my name I used to be I'm Me For A Reason
Ther're gonna have to get Tsunade aren't they? please Update soon THANKS!!!
person GrowlingTurtlez
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think the latest chapter is wonderful, just like the others! I don't think you should feel any pressure to pick up the pace of the story though. Even though some other reviewers may want you to, I think that's just impatience on their part. A slower pace won't hurt the story. Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter!
person Lyric
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHH! SEPTEMBER? ......I guess I can wait...You are doing a great job! Keep going.
And I will review. I love where your goin. And I am waiting eagerly for what will happen.
Update and I'll review!
person Briryan
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!) Oh is it baby time? Can't wait to find out what happenes next. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Anna
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Newe chappy! But I think that I can't hold on until spetember, it's too interesting! I want to know what is happening to Naruto! And how they're going to fix it! Tsunade is a medical nin right? Will Shikamru ask her for help?

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