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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person melsa
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Name it Bob!
person chelzi
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO!! i want another chapter!! NOW!!~
person Giggi
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, I love your story. I love Sas/Naru pairings, and they have a sone, very cute. Cannot wait for the next chapter, hope it's soon.
person Gwynhafra
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol. What a way for Sasuke to find out. Very nice. Hope there will be more description about the baby so I can happily imagine what a chibi Sasuke/Naruto looks like. Will be waiting for the next update. ^^
person tortilla lady
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
again a great job on the story, just with it was a little longer!!! ^_^ name the baby after iruka!!!! just kidding!!!
person Shadow
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Sasuke knows now, or he always knew... *Blinks.*... Whatever-YAY! Lol. I loved it. You're an awesome writer, I can't wait till the next chapter. A name for a NaruxSasu baby, that's a hard one. Good luck. I'm sure you'll pick a good one. =3

-Shadow
person dana
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story. it is very detailed and though most people do not like long chapters i throughly enjoy them. i can't wait to find outthe old man's story. i also can't wait til naruto wakes up and him and sasuke talk to each other. can't wait til your next update.
person Fallen
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Loved this story please update soon
person o^_____^o
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you should Name the baby Unmei.
It's a girl's name, but in japanese it means Destiny.
cos naruto and Sasuke were DESTINED to be together.
person Draconayzia
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really heartwarming. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

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