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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nice fic indeed. You don't see many smut fics that are written well these days, but this one was exceptional. I really do hope you consider writing more fics in the future!
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! I'm trying to bring to mind something that might accurately depict to you my feelings on this, but I think 'hot damn' seems to work just fine. I haven't even read part two yet, but I just had to tell you how much I love this. This is one of the best damn PWPs I've read in a looong time. And hey, any excuse (pun intended) to get my two favorite guys from "Naruto" into bed is great to me.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like very much
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=D
need i say more?
love the way you write them. especially sasuke.
^_^
write more.
need i say more?
love the way you write them. especially sasuke.
^_^
write more.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Hope you liked it".... are you serious? lol
Pure smut, more importantly - pure, well written smut. I find authors often believe that something along the lines of "jump him, stick it in, oh -oh god - oh YES" actually works. It doesn't.
Of course, that doesn't mean I want ten chapters of emotional bullshit before I get to the bonking. Your fic is a perfect example of perfect smut. ^_^ And I thank you for it - nothing else was waking me up this morning. XD
Pure smut, more importantly - pure, well written smut. I find authors often believe that something along the lines of "jump him, stick it in, oh -oh god - oh YES" actually works. It doesn't.
Of course, that doesn't mean I want ten chapters of emotional bullshit before I get to the bonking. Your fic is a perfect example of perfect smut. ^_^ And I thank you for it - nothing else was waking me up this morning. XD
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was awesome.
Haha, oh, how I love good smut.
XD! I like your writing style too, so write moooore! *whines*
-P.
Haha, oh, how I love good smut.
XD! I like your writing style too, so write moooore! *whines*
-P.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tomorrow, ne? Sounds great. This threesome is uber-hot, as always.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<3!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!! You have to continue this fic!! XD It's soooo cute (not to mention hot, too!) and I'm in love!!!! <3<3
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That's got to be the best PWP I've ever read! It was hilarious, not to mention really, really hot. I kept thinking of old English men whenever you said "arse" ............ hmmmm.....yeah....
Anyway, I loved the interaction between the two of them. I didn't think they were that OOC, even though technically, every yaoi is OOC b/c Kishimoto didn't write it. If only!
I can't wait for part 2, so you better not be late! ^_^
Anyway, I loved the interaction between the two of them. I didn't think they were that OOC, even though technically, every yaoi is OOC b/c Kishimoto didn't write it. If only!
I can't wait for part 2, so you better not be late! ^_^
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOWIEE!! This is so so HOt and Hilarious at the same time. Great work. I wonder what Neji is thinking right now?~grin..Could it be anger or lust?~heheh..Please update soon~ I really love this chapter.Its Great.