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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is sooo hot! I can't wait to see who the ANBU really is?!
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice. ^^ I love the idea. am I correct in assuming the ANBU is Kakashi?
although, I WOULD suggest getting a beta; I've noticed several grammatical mistakes that would be easily fixed.
although, I WOULD suggest getting a beta; I've noticed several grammatical mistakes that would be easily fixed.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Iruka/Kakashi is my favorite pairing, although I really like the idea of Iruka and Genma. This is a wonderful story and fast becoming one of my favorites. Iruka is done so realistically, given Mizuki's betrayal and his trusting nature at the time. When a first love betrays us, it's much harder to get past than those that follow. Kakashi -- yummy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay another one.....
Can't wait till I read the next........
Please hurry!!!!!.......................... ^-^
Can't wait till I read the next........
Please hurry!!!!!.......................... ^-^
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice very nice indeed! this is getting way good so keep it coming please!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I´m so happy! I think this was my best xmas present this year. God damn, you have wrote that ANBU guy (I wonder who he is? ;) ) very nicely, sexy yum!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing for Kakashi. But that's just a guess. Anyway, a good chapter, please continue like you have done uptil now, and Merry Christmas!
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It has every thing a good story should have. Iruka, sex, and angst. Ahh! who is the sexy Anbu!? I have a few people in mind that fit the bill just right. But I just don't know. Please update as soon as you can!
Happy holidays and Happy New Year!
much love, mina-mina
Happy holidays and Happy New Year!
much love, mina-mina
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so awesome!!!!
I just can not wait till the next chapter comes....
this story is so I don't know how to say it. just really REALLY GREAT!!!!!!
I just can not wait till the next chapter comes....
this story is so I don't know how to say it. just really REALLY GREAT!!!!!!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very, very nice story, even if it's having some spelling mistakes and so on. I'm looking forward to know who this misterious ANBU is (as if I had no notion ;)). Keep on going!!! And maybe you could upload chapter 4 again, since it seems to be lost after AFF's datbase glitch about one week ago.