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for Captured in Your Eyes

by SuishouTenshi

schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was so awesome. You fit so much into just 2 parts!! It was a crazy ride, especially in the first chapter.. I had a feeling it was Itachi using mangekyou, but the added lie about "collecting kyuubi" that way I wasn't expecting. Sasuke's reaction during and afterward felt very natural, and all the emotions from Naruto, Sasuke, Gaara, and even Sai's reaction to the situation were like, perfect. I really liked everything about Naruto and Sasuke's last scene, too; especially the way Sasuke got rid of the seal. Loved it all, glad you wrote it! ^__^
person macy
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my. you should write more sasunaru!! this is so good. oooh.. wow. i love it so much!!! angst=love. heehee..sai was adorable in this fic too.
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very intense story. well written and entertaining. like how you added events from recent manga to it.
person ses
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
absolutey lurrrrve it! heartfelt thanks to ya 4 writing a sasunaru ficcie.....
pls do come bk 2 naruto world soon.. in the meantime i'll wait 4 ya hpdm
updates..
person losthimagain
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw! That was cute! Good job!
person noise.
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, this was beautiful.

And a note to your author's note on the second part, Shining Collection is actually by Iceman. :X
person kyuubigirl
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that's the best thing I've read in a long while. That went exactly how I would have imagined it and then so much better. What an awesome idea. And it was so, so hot. And that was just the first chapter. I gotta go fan myself for a bit. OMG that was just so sexy. The dialogue? Egads, hot, hot, hot... and even though it was Itachi everything they did... HOT. I love you!
person akasha
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to admit that i really liked this. damn itachi, the fucking bastard. but i'm glad that they worked it out in the end. i feel sorry for gaara, though. i think that he and naruto would have made a great couple! maybe after the wounds heal, sasuke and gaara could overcome their feelings of dislike and then they could be one big, happy trio!!! no? well, i can wish can't i??
good work... i look forward to more of your stories!
person Neko-Chan
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! The plot fit well with the original anime, the characters were in, well, character, and writing was beautiful!
Plus, you used Sai!!! *gets you cookies!!*
person priestess123
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Intense! I hope you don't give up on this story! I want to know what happens! Update soon!

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