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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo.. that was good.. can you do a trheesome fic??
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<(0_o)> ummmm...YEA^_^. I guess that was nice. I wasn't horrible and I made me feel fuzy so rock on! Im not one to complain when I know I couldn't do better ^_^ It was fun! PEACE!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww, the fluff was cute. Very nice....very nice indeed...
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally!! some explicit suke!sasuke where it's not just orals!!! ^.^ god, you're god, did you know? i love you now, just cuz you wrote this *.*
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice indeed. Very hot....mmmmmm
I did have trouble with the whole, Sasuke and Itachi being brothers again. It just doesn't seem plausible. I can undertand the not killing part, but being friends again? Wouldn't work for me.
Other than that, it was a great little story. ^_^
I did have trouble with the whole, Sasuke and Itachi being brothers again. It just doesn't seem plausible. I can undertand the not killing part, but being friends again? Wouldn't work for me.
Other than that, it was a great little story. ^_^
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The idea itself was good, but the way your story was written was a bit difficult to read. Sasuke and Naruto were also a bit out of character, especially at the end. I honestly can't imagine the words "Naru-chan" and "Suke-chan" coming out of Sasuke and Naruto's mouths without EXTREME sarcasm being involved ^^;
Once again, I really liked the idea. I think that if you went over it with a beta and editted Sasuke and Naruto's personalities a bit, it would be really great.
Once again, I really liked the idea. I think that if you went over it with a beta and editted Sasuke and Naruto's personalities a bit, it would be really great.