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for Under The Enemy's Roof

by hangingday

person Chichiri
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELLO! just one thing to say "ROCK ON" well thats all hoping for another chapter ^_^
person Anon
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE SO AWESOME!!!! I love your story....I hope you do wonderful on your psychology exam :)
person fyredevyl
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Character torture! Sounds wonderful! Thanks for updating so quickly too! I can't wait for the love triangles to develop even more, or the er...polygons! LMAO! Anyway, great update, and can't wait to read more! ^_^
.....so many exclamation points!
person Dansu
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your new chapter, I like how sasuke doesn't know that he is in love with Naruto. and the way his acts like naurto is his. Um... is Neji and Garra in Love with Naurto too? Are the three of them going to figth over Naruto ?? Will Naruto get over what neji did and become his friend again , because neji was the only one naruto seem to like. Or will he forgive Sasuke for the past ??? And when is Itachi coming in? and will Naruto remember Itachi? and did Naurto kill his parent , but he just can't remember doing it , or did Itachi do it ???? scine Nauro and Itachi used to played together when they where younger , will itachi be nice to Naruto ? will Naruto be nice to itachi , and how will sasuke act with this????? I can't wait until you updata again.
person phoenixdown7
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is simply captivating. I wasn't even going to read a fanfic, because I don't really have much time, but I just glanced at the first page of yours and I couldn't stop reading. Your use of allegories, metaphors, and description is superb. It just adds a whole new depth to what could very likely be a unremarkable story in another author's hands. I, like you, breathe SasuNaru. So I was glad to see that this story, which I enjoy so much, is going to end up with that pairing (right?). My favorite fics probably have to do with love-triangles above all else, so this fic is already a perfect match for my tastes. Thank you so much for sharing this fic, and good luck on the remaining chapters. ^_^
person Ari
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was simply superb! *Lifts pinky out and places it on her lip thoughtfully* I sense a love square, ne? Am I right? Because it certainly seems that way, with Sasuke, Neji and Gaara after Naruto an' all... I didn't understand why Gaara alluva sudden decided that Naruto was interesting. Was it before, or after he beat up Naruto? XD I hope there's gonna be some Itachi action there! I want to see what Itachi does and all that blah. I know Itachi won't be after Naruto, but it is rather amusing to see his reactions, yanno! ...Anyways, update soon, yah?

~Waiting for your next update *Bounces around and squeals* Make it soon, MAKE IT SOON! ^___^
Ari
person Ciar
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon, I really want to see where this is going.
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love UkeNaru. Take one taste and you're hooked for life. Esp. when it comes to love triangles...or in this case, a love square. Wait...it could become a love pentagon when Itachi shows up!

UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOONER! UPDATE NOW!

PS Though I love UkeNaru, I'm tired of Sasuke winning Naruto in the end in love triangle fics! LET SOMEONE ELSE WIN!
person Sukara
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Another chapter. ^_^ I'm root you to pass collage!!! ^o^ What career are you heading for?
person Seto\'s Darkness
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... I feel special that you mentioned me in the chapter *melts with fuzziness* Okay, you're every reader's dream! :) You update VERY quickly, and regularly and if not for the fact that I'm currently having some blasted finals, I'll be writing a LOT longer review T__T Yay for SasuNaru! XD XD XD The plot thickens when Naruto's 18??? Hmm... so when he's legal and stuff??? :P This story is VERY interesting ^__^ In its own kind of way [There are stories that are unique because of the smut *YES!*, for the humor, for the angst, etc, etc, but your story is interesting because it makes me think of MANY, many things that could possibly happen in the future] If you noticed, I think I'm giving lots of guesses about what's going to happen soon/next [and you don't want to spoil anything away *mock sniffling and pouts*] So yeah. This story really makes me think :) I can only imagine what would happen in the future :D

Love triangles-squares are nice and interesting, but it's also kinda overdone. ^^;; I dunno, but a insane, badass Gaara is really appealing to me :) And a Neji who wants peace and happiness XD [is a NejiGaa/GaaNeji fan :P] I wonder when's Itachi arriving....... I just know it, he's got something to do with Naruto's condition [which probably has something to do with the Kyuubi anyway, from what you hinted when he fainted, about having ultra-sharp senses and stuff...] :) The suspense is killing me [along with my exams X__X] hahaha =) Looking forward to some more! ^______^ *hint*Itachi*hint*

PS: The "order" by Sasuke really ROCKS ^__^ A very overprotective *brother*, ne? Poor, poor Sasuke. He still doesn't know that he loves Naruto, even though he EXUDES the fact that he really does. And man, that's some nice, compromising position you got there :P And ack, I don't hate Sakura *that much* right now, but she's still annoying for me :P Kinda. So yeah. And the love polygon stretches!!! ^___^

SasuNaru RULES :) Keep up the good work XD

>> Seto's Darkness

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