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for To Win Her Heart

by insomniac247

person Karista
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing...I'm interested in reading more. I love the dark tone set out, and it seems there's much more to reveal in future chapters. I hope this one continues, very nice mix of sensuality and plot.
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Uh Oh!!!! hehe This is gonna be good! What is Sasuke gonna do? update soon!

Well written story that keeps the reader wanting to see what comes next! Good use of language, very few mistakes. Great character development. Overall a very enjoyable read.
person Bella 07
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think that this story is very very good, keep writing i want to know what happens! who is this story going to end up as? kakashi/sakura? sasuke/sakura? or kakashi/sakura/sasuke? plz!!!!!!! i want to know!!
person krickets
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh that was HOT!
you didnt overplay the love scene and that was great
i like it and i cant wait for the next chapter.
*sits in corner waiting and grinning madly*
person Ari
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! xD You always leave us hanging like this! One of these days I think I'm going to to fall off! =P
person Valkyrie
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was so sweet! But I have a hard time believing that Sasuke's really out of her system. We shall soon see! Wheee! Will he find out about she and Kakashi? And Sasuke and Ino being together just doesn't sit right with me. Ack! I'm so confused now about who I'm rooting for. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep 'em coming! ^,^
person Valkyrie
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! Good story. The turmoil and angst makes me so gleeful for some reason, which is wierd since I'm usually not like that. Aneewho, I love it! When will Sasuke find out about Sakura and Kakashi? And when he does, will he be angry and jealous? And I know Kakashi has superb control but he's got to be feeling some frustration. Ooooo! I have so many questions and I can't wait to see what happens! Write on, oh great Black Sheep! I anxiously await the next chapter! ^.^
person M-Liz
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, it's very well written. I wonder if your taking couple wishing, however I did not see anything about that so I am just going to continue reading and see where you take it. Both pairings are awsome in my book, but I wouldn't mind a Sasu.Saku because there aren't many that are well written out there, and this site is lacking em badly.
Keep it coming, I'll be reading :)
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just like a woman, finding fault when there is 'none' in a man. URG! Of course I've done that...what it is about perfect men? Do we have to throw them away just to torment ourselves? So annoying.

Spectacularly well written as usual. You're making the rest of us look bad you know. But at least you're doing it while making us happy (especially me). Makes me wanna cuddle up to Kakashi the way you describe him.

Your Nushi
person Kireiko
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice next installment. Again, thoroughly enjoyable to read, I liked the equal parts of angst and sweetness mixed in together. I was waiting and watching for when you'd post this newest chapter and I was not disappointed... well, as always the good chapters are always too short but you've done a lovely job so far. *sigh* Now I only have to wait for the next chapter... Keep up the good work.

Until the next update... and thank you for your kind words as well, sakka-san.

~Kir

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