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person Marielle
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am such a groupie...


Great chapter! Yay to Chouji and Gaara! Will they be having a little bundle of joy too?


Can't wait until the next chapter...
person vashta
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is what I have been waiting for, and I am psyched for some Gaa/Cho, yes! A little cloud watching female Neji would be so great, I can't wait to see where this goes. Sasuke is such a good mommy, I knew he had it in him.
person Marielle
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rejoice! There is m-preg!



Yay to Neji and Shika! Shika, though lazy, will be a great dad. And Neji will be the prettiest mommy on the block (next to Sasuke...)!

And Gaara loves bubbles baths?!?! Classic... truely classic.


Can't wait for the next chapter!
person vashta
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, little Neji! I like it!!! I am glad this is still going, I am still waiting for my Gaa/Cho action! Please don't dissappoint me! If Neji and Shika have a baby, can it be a girl, someone needs to have one, raising a girl is a totally different can of worms from raising a boy, someone needs the anxiety of it! I think the potential writing material involved with Shika and Neji raising a girl is great! Ok, I have made my argument, good update and progression, on with the show!
person Marielle
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...If there is no mpreg...


I will cry. I will cry and cry and cry...

Well, you get the point.

And I think Sasuke should be the mommy.

And awwwwwy's on the new baby, Koibito!! ^_^ I hope we get to hear more about him in later chapters? Will we be able to get any more info about the other babies?


I'm very excited for the next chapter! How many chapters long do you intend for this fic to be?!?
person Serenia
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting seeing Choji take the fatherly role. Do you suppose that will take the place of being the baby, or will he spend some time doing each?
I've never been a big mpreg fan, but I've been enjoying your stories so much that I couldn't not read it!
person Marielle
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do we want mpreg?!? OF COURSE!!


I'd prefer the Uchiha to get knocked up though...


Naruto being pregnant is too common...


Or better yet...


Wiat.. nvm. I'd have to think long and hard on any other ninja to do it.

Chouji and Gaara together. I can't wait. And niether can Gaara, so it seems... :P

Lookin forward to the next chapter Crazy Nut!
person vashta
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I had to play catch up today. I am so glad that they are keeping the baby, but as for an m-preg, I don't know who should carry it. If you go that way, Naru would be my choice, because I don't like Sasu as a female for extended periods, but it is your fic!!! I am ready for some Gaara/Cho lemony goodness!!!! I knew you could do it!
person Marielle
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You crazy nut, you!

Great chapter! Yes, I made it... I wouldn't miss this for the world!

Any ways, I've found that leaving the Oro-Spawns with Gay couples a rather interesting thing with in this story. I read the reasoning. But couldn't it be possible for straight couples to take care of the babies? Not all straight couples want children, nor can some actualyl have babies by natural means. Not saying it's bad... just an interesting thought I had with my self.

Also... are we gonna have some mpreg?!? Is Naruto gonna do it? I mean, he does have the higher amount of chakra. I can't wait to see where that goes!

And Chouji and Gaara? A couple?!? Wow, Wow, Wow. That will be a first in the fanfiction world. (at least from what I've seen anyways.) Question is... Who's bottoming... My money says Chouji.

Gaara learning the Baby Jutsu? Hmm, wonder wh he picks to take care of him. I can only think of Sasuke/Naruto or Chouji doing it. Gaara's only got be sooo much trust to go around!


Keep up the great work! Patiently awaiting the next chapter!
person Marielle
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was freakin' hilarious. You deserve two brownies and a chocolate chip cookie!

I started reading Self Reliance a few days ago. It is very good.

And don't worry, your stories are very well written. I check for updates on your stories first, when ever I come to this site! ^_^


As of now... I'm 21... my real age. I must read the next chapter!! @_@



Peace and Hairgrease!

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