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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bravo, strangly this is the first story I've seen that uses the 'hypothermia cure' situation and yet it make so much sense. Either way you did a wonderful job.
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sheesh I just read the other reviews, to much pressure. Unless you feel like doing it don't do it, but I can see where the others are coming from this could definitly be a longer story, not very but meh.
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly good. You should seriously consider adding some chaps to this or maybe do a rewrite of it.(you could easily lengthen the first chapter into 5 or 6 and it would improve the story immensly). Congratulations, you can sit at the cool peoples table now. :)
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, i still cant figure out this site... I didnt want to hide my email. if you are looking for any help with beta reading just ask and i would be more then happy. My email is Nameramthgin@hotmail.com
(who coulda guessed that one? lol. That offer applies to anyone writing naruto fics. My favorite coupling is of course naru and hina so i can never refuse a request to beta read for a story for then. cheers all.
(who coulda guessed that one? lol. That offer applies to anyone writing naruto fics. My favorite coupling is of course naru and hina so i can never refuse a request to beta read for a story for then. cheers all.
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the best story i have read on this site yet
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, keep writing.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! AWSOME!!!
anyway on another note.
Very good. You pictured them very well, although naruto seemed "slightly" OOC but not to the point that it was bad. I think that you captured the moment perfectly and that I would LOVE to see more chapters. Keep up the great work!
- Shadow
Hinata/Naruto lover
anyway on another note.
Very good. You pictured them very well, although naruto seemed "slightly" OOC but not to the point that it was bad. I think that you captured the moment perfectly and that I would LOVE to see more chapters. Keep up the great work!
- Shadow
Hinata/Naruto lover
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this story cuz I like it... Who do they fight and how did he get the wound in his chest... I like how them two become close and he keeps her warm but I hope to see you write this to its fullest potential... JTB8834@aol.com if you wanna talk
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice NaruHina! (My fav pairing in the series) Maybe is a bit rushed, specially the declaration of love but the sex scene is romantic and nice ^^
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, you should definatly write a second, and maybe even third chapter as soon as possible ^_^
truly one of the best storys of NaruXHina out there.
truly one of the best storys of NaruXHina out there.