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by Mieren

person Kokoromotonai
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Kakashi-sensei-sama truly is a considerate person aside from being perverted and entertaining thoughts of him and male a male child together. He though about Naruto's feelings before doing anything, and making sure to see if he was okay with it first. That's why I love Kakashi-sensei-sama! It's because he is a considerate and truly handsome lover. And Naru-chan-san so cute, he's worthy of my love. This fic was real good. A big change from the usual Sasu/Naru pairings. You should write more like this one! ^_^
person A New Fan-Jin
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..This was great!! To be honest, I have doubts about this story because Im not really a fan of KakashiNaru stories but your story changed my name. This is really sweet. When I read it, really felt sorry for Kakashi-sensei for his broken and longing heart. You should have seen me, I was leaping with glee when he went with Naruto-kun^ ^

This was great job..I hope you continue it^ ^

Love ya!!!
person Erika
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was GREAT but half the time I wasn't sure if Naruto was for it or not....Oh well, its nice to read a kaka/naru story THEY ARE SO FREAKING RARE!!!
person Akume
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I got to hand it to you, this was tuly an amazing fic. Loved the interaction in the end. I hope you write another, seeing as this type of pairing is rare and therefore intrigues me.a
person vashta
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me this was not a one-shot!? It is way too good a start to stop. I just hope they do develop some genuine affection, love, because it would be bad for Naru to be used and left.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting idea, and very well done. There were a few inconsistancies, but over all it was very well done. (For example, when Kakashi asked Naruto if he had hurt him and Naruto replies "No...but I liked it", it would make more sense if it was "Yes, but I liked it" b/c of the earlier "masochistic" comment -- which I totally agree with, BTW! Also, why/when would Kakashi have thought that Naruto was unconscious? I couldn't figure out how that fit in with the story, so that part confused me...) ^^ I really enjoyed this, though, especially the characterizations of the two and the descriptions that you used, so I hope that you plan to continue writing. You could even write a "sequel" to this if you wanted to... ^__~ Again, good job, and keep up the good work!!!
person Stormraven
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written and I absolutely love the pairing. I do hope this is not a one-shot, hoping to see this turn into a series. Would like to find out Konoha's reactions to the pairing. And if Tsunade and Iruka try to beat Kakashi senseless for corrupting their innocent Naruto? I wonder how the rest of the Rookie 9 react to a Sensei/student relationship? Hope to see more in the future!
person chi no hana
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww... how cute!
person ran
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Little confused by the ending. But hoping to see another chapter!

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