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Oh my god!Congratulations, it's a very good fic.I hope that there is more chapters..
It's a very nice plot, I was totally hooked.And I hope that the stranger is Kakashi too, I love Kakashi and Iruka, but if don't its a very good fic anyway and I have an open mind.Congratulations again.Sorry if I writed anythign wrogn, english is not my first language...

ohhh what's gunna happen next time?, who will it be?

Heh. I like it, though I'm curious as to who it was X3.

Hot and romantic! Thanks for posting this!

Hot and romantic! Thanks for posting this!

yay i was wondering if u were going to just leave it two chaps.. love it

Ardor( I may have spelt that wrong ) means passion,its physical..adore is a mental state..j.f.y.i.You have a very good imagination and you improved your spelling so much in the second fic that this one was a surprise but a good one none the less.I like your brain,not coy,and really raunchy.I foresee a very favorable future here for you.Thank you.May I say one thing?Every one for some strange reason uses the saying "I could have cared less"to mean not care at all when the proper saying is "I couldn't have cared less,I couldn't care less" meaning there is no concern at all,which is what they are trying to say .It is wierd and I hate it so I thought I'd warn you ahead of time because this maddness has to stop some where.Don't get me started on "reign him in "instead of the proper 'Rein him in" like a horse,to be controlled or opps too late.To tell the truth I thoughrt the invader was Itachi till you said he recognised his scent from the school....ummm actually he would recognise it from the Hokages office where he also does paper work for the Third...Kakashi would/does not normally work with very untrained children.I really like your work so I hope you write alot more.Itachi and Sasuke rock the planet!

This story is really wonderful, I read it a while ago, but had to come back. You have a really wonderful writing style.

Wow this was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hot!!!!!!!!!
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

wow, that was awesome. So sweet and at the same time so erotic. great work!