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Coming from you I know this is gonna be a real mind bender.Vamps done well are always are treat

Another vamp fic! They're not my favourite -- well, there aren't many around in the first place ... -- but I can see a story with potential in yours. Talented!!! Keep it up~

Yay! Very promising start, I'm so glad that your writing another story. It is always nice to see you writing again

Ooh! You have me intrigued. Please keep writing; you're off to a great start!

Wonderful! Simply wonderful! It brought back memories of Anita Blake when she was still cool and not whiny. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it comes out soon, although I'm not sure if that's a good thing since it will distract me from my school work. Ah well.....
Your spelling and grammar was excellent, esp. since it's an unbeta'd version. I only saw one instance where two verbs were in different tenses, just towards the end of the chapter.
Keep up the great work!
^_^

Yay!!! I love your stories! I can't wait until the next chapter. You've already got me hooked. Update soon!

Yay!! I love how this fic is going and not to mention,wow!!I'm so excited that I can't wait for the next chapter since I was surprised that Naruto actually saw the dark eyes gazing into his before the chapter ended and I really have a feeling I know who it is. But still I'm so happy I get to read another story of yours especially since Spiral falling was one of the best fics I read from here and Z-H!! Well I hope to read the next one soon, love it Becca!!!

Saki

Oh my god. A new story!! >_< lol, I am a *huge* fan of your spiral falling fic (and others) and I'm so excited you're writing a new one! Ahhh wow, as usual, your writing provides the best imagery of any fanfics I've read. I absolutely love your style and just... well, everything! *Thank* you for bringing the best Naruto fanfiction to my computer, I am your ever-loyal fan. I like how you put Mizuki in it, heh. He's been getting a couple episodes lately too. Everytime I read your stories I could just imagine it being a movie, *laugh*. I'll be keeping up with this story, thanks for starting another one! You're fantastic! ^_^

~LizD Kai

Cool premise, I like how you opened up the story. And I can't wait to see where you take this story. Keep up the good work.